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....Damn Cliffhangers....Now I gotta wait for your next awesome chapter about the boys! *Breaks down crying hysterically*

i shall wait patiently for the smut ^__^

I love your story so much and it's only chapter 1!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UP DATE SOON!!!!!!!!!

Hm... well, I did try to read this because I absolutely adore ItaSasu, but there were a few things that just kept me from being able to enjoy it. First, there are several grammar errors, usually with beginning and ending quotations; really with correctly inserting things BETWEEN quotes. Also, Sasuke and Itachi are pretty out of character. I also find it sort of unbelievable that their principal would call an incestual relationship between them "cute" or whatever it was. ^^; It's just... difficult to see. Yes, we all love Tsunade, but... she does have a position of authority. If she just wanted to ignore what was going on between them, that would be one thing, but condoning an incestual relationship (which I'm pretty sure is illegal in America, but I don't know about Japan) could probably get her fired.

Other than that, you've got an okay plot going aside from a few punctuation errors (which should be easy to fix) and some OOC-ness. Keep working at it.

Nice start to your fanfic, I look forward to the next chapter.

Ok, this has to be said: their name is Uchiha. Otherwise a good fic! Update soon.

omg u have to update soon

Nice...keep going! Man I have to admit people have this weird tendency to butt their noses into other peoples business, as if they have no lives themselves lol.