rate_review Reviews

This,Definitely,Goes To My Top 3 NaruHina Fics.

This Was Beautiful.It Started A Bit Rough.I Ended Up Thinking,'Hmm...Plain,Pld,Typical Naruto-Sees-Hinata-Naked And They End Up Together' BUT After I Read The First,Then The Second,Erotic Scene...I Was,Like,'OMG.THIS Is Different.'

Seriously.I've Read Lots Of Lemons And Smut Scenes...But Yours Were So...Not only Erotic...But Sweetly Sensual...With A Touch Of Decadence.There Was EMOTION.

I Loved It.

There Was NOTHING OOC.Your Writing Style Is Near Perfect (I Say NEAR Perfect As Nothing In The World Is Perfect)...

I Just Simply,Truly Loved It.

Can't Wait For The Sequel.

I'm A Huge Fan.

Also,If You Need A Beta Reader,Ask Me.You Can Contact Me On Yukiko Hosokoawa @ AIM/AOL Or chrysallis_reborn@hotmail.com.I Would LOVE To Get In Touch With You.

I'll Be Waiting For More Awesomeness.

Also,I Loved How You Portrayed Kyuubi.He's A Doll. =)

oh vrap i know were this is from -.- i have thelink 2 the frist part theat u posted

::Bawls:: No matter how many times I read this it always makes me cry! T_T :hiccup: So sweet....

Finally a story with a solid plotline and developed characters
I wanted to review on each chapter, but I couldn't help reading on. So I'll go back and give constructive critism on the things that could be improved.
I also write, but have never had the courage to post anything (mostly the fear of somebody stealing my work) If you write something more please email me... even if its to say: more! coz ur swamped down by other requests and stuff. I draw as well, and if possible i wanna run something to go with ur story? email me.
CONGRATULATIONS!
HAPPY NEW YEAR!

Man this story was great. Not a bad ending either. The beginning to the next story looks exciting cant wait to read it!

What can I say....wow.

Just wow.

I have never been this impressed with a NaruHina fic before. You actually did something that few writers these days have been able to do....you had me reading every single chapter, hanging on almost every single word. The fic played out almost like a real Naruto Story arc, and each chapter was like an episode I couldn't bear to miss. From the first love scene, to Hinata's fever, to the very last goodbye, I read each and every word and I have to say, you've outdone most of the other writers here.

Of course not everything was perfect....a few spelling mistakes, grammatical errors and a few annoying contractions (using w/ for "with" in a fanfic nearly had me tracking you down to rip out your fingers, but I got over it :D) left a bitter aftertaste at some points, but those were quickly forgotten as I read on.

I want to read the sequel...but for some reason I feel like if I did, I would ruin the experience...and I don't know what your twisted mind has planned!

As I have said since I began watching Naruto....NARUHINA FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Peace be with you, oh kind writer!

Well I like your stories I just wish you would update them more often then not update them at all why I say that is I heck I think everybody wants toknow what is going to happen next in your story Into the Desert

YOU ARE A GOD this is the single best thing that i have read all year can't wait for more it's just so real i love it I cried at the end it was and is beutiful and very funny keep up the good work

An Amazing fic. The best one i have read so far. The teaser that you put at the end if the last chapter just has me quivering with anticipation. Cant wait till the next chapter is up. Hope its up soon. If you can, could you please send me an e-mail once you have the sequal up? I really would hate to miss it when it does get put on the site.

Fricken kick ass stroy. So good cant wait to ssee next one.... wait is it up yet. Gonna go check