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for Into the Woods

by kyubiteaser

person WS
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you know, I' pretty sure this fits the definition of 'Cruel and Unusual Punishment', it's just not fair to leave people hanging like this. In other words, update soon, please. *Pulls out a nickle on a string and holds it over the Berkley Pit* Or you'll never see Philip the Nickle again!

P.S. Berkley pit is an old mining pit in Montana that filled up with water, and is extrememly acidic.
person Kyuubi Fanatic
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my GOD! this is the best NaruHina fic i have ever seen!! this is my favorite pairing next to tayuya/naruto and it is extremely hard to find good naruhina fics right now...
This is the best i've seen and i can't wait till 'Into the Desert'. You did a great job of capturing their relationship, and you've become one of my favorite authors. (I read all twenty chapters today in a row)
I'm rooting for ya!! If you ever need sumthin' e-mail me!
person colin
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
stupid lil preview cliff hanger *dies*, now i realy need to scower the naruto pages looking for this :D. Keep up the awesome work.
person nonengel
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice ending, i liked the gifts as well as Neji role in this chapter

thank you for sharing this
person Hestia
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I admit I'm dumb here, I'm not seeing where this is going and supposedly there is only 1 chapter left--two days to wait!! I really like your Naruto and Hinata, and I hope they can be happy. I love the party scene, and the whole bit with Jiraiya is very funny! Thanks for the email about the update! Sorry I haven't review sooner. Keep up the good work--good luck with the new story!
person cazacomi
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story I love everything but in chapter 19 when you were talking about the sequel is that going to be a narutoXhinata or is it going to be a diferent pairing?
person Josh
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice update but you should of made it a bit longer cuz you gave us a cliff hanger and now I am really really going to go crazy til you update and plus when did Naruto get that mission to be away from everyone for god who knows how long and what will Hinata and Sakura do when he is gone. Plus what are they going to talk about when you pick up the story from where Naruto,Neji and Sakura get to there talk and I hope we can talk soon... JTB8834@aol.com
person colin
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sob* your gunna end this, its so totaly awesome though, but at least your working on a sequel, or have been YAY :D. Can't wait for more :D, best hinatxnaruto fic ever. and i have read quite a few lol.
person BradenIsMyMonkey
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, thats awesome! I feel sad now, why does Naruto have to go? T-T I can't wait till the update comes around!!!
person Plo_Koonxk16
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best fics i have ever read. The story follows the plot perfectly. I can't wait for the end and then "Into the Desert"