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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love everything that is happening within this little pocket world.
You have to update soon! I cant stand not to have new chapters!
Update soon.
A major fan,
the fox of the silver snow
You have to update soon! I cant stand not to have new chapters!
Update soon.
A major fan,
the fox of the silver snow
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well done, this chapter had a good mood to it, between the beginning with its mixture of happiness and sadness to the party with it feeling of friendship and caring to naruto and hinata's time with its mixutre of love and passion. Every scene was detailed just enough to express itself well without being booged down by minute and un-important information.
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice update and glad that you were able to update so quickly too. Hope to hear from you when you update again and I would like to get to know you some more and keep up the good writing
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you didn't let Lee get drunk. Drunken Rock Lee beating up Kiba for hitting on Sakura would have been humor at its finest. Still, easily the best Naru/Hina fic in existence even if the smut in recent chaps was a bit short, and I look forward to updates and conclusions! And for gods sake give Kyuubi some attitude, he's a complete pushover.
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapter! I like how Neiji is trying to help out--a nice touch there.
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAYA! Just the thing before I have to go two weeks without a computer. I loved it! SO does Hinata get to find out that Kyuubi is inside Naruto soon? Is she ever going to remember what happened? I know nosie nosie But I really loved the chapter and will be looking for the next one.
Happy writing Legilmyth
Happy writing Legilmyth
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story, the various character interactiosn have been enjoyable and I loved the images that were brought up form your description of Naruto healing Hinata.
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice update glad ot have Hinata back in the land of the living and Naruto is protective of her and everyone else that is in his life so hope to see an update from you soon. Keep up the great writing for this story and what will Sakura be like after she heard him say he loved her and she is one of his precious person in his life. Josh
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I cant wait for the next chapter.
Update soon... cause I dont think that I can wait very long for the next chapter.
Update soon... cause I dont think that I can wait very long for the next chapter.
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's still good, update soon or I'll sick my shocky monkey on you- well I would if I had one anyway, I want a shocky monkey damn it!
*looks up at the nice men in the white coats that have come to take me away to the nice little padded room*
Well, looke like I gotta go.
*looks up at the nice men in the white coats that have come to take me away to the nice little padded room*
Well, looke like I gotta go.