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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story hope to see a update. I like the way your portraying the characters of Naruto but I don't know about Ino being caring like the way she was, but I think she is like that with the flower shop and all. I hope to hear from you and I bet you can't let Hinata leave Naruto like this cuz it would kill him and he wouldn't know what to do. Sakura might be able to keep him from going crazy but keep Hinata alive plz.
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very excellent,i would like the next chap please
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excelent! I really like how you have Kyuubi, the whole story line is well thought out and it reminds me of the twists I ocationally use.
I am really looking forward to see how you go from here so keep up the good work and hope to see another chapter soon.
I am really looking forward to see how you go from here so keep up the good work and hope to see another chapter soon.
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!! YOU CAN'T JUST STOP THERE!!! YOU ARE EVIL!!!
ok, now that I got that out of my system, I just love this story, I can't wait for the next chapter! You totally rock! I am so very jealous! And I like your version of Kyuubi (sorry if I miss spelled his name). Anyways, I hope that your muse influences you to write so I can find out what happens. Oh, it's so good, I just want to hug you. OMG, I mean really. Alot of the stuff you get on-line isn't very good, but I totally couldn't stop reading. Ok, I have to stop gushing, lol, I'm embarrasing myself, lol. But seriously, good job.
ok, now that I got that out of my system, I just love this story, I can't wait for the next chapter! You totally rock! I am so very jealous! And I like your version of Kyuubi (sorry if I miss spelled his name). Anyways, I hope that your muse influences you to write so I can find out what happens. Oh, it's so good, I just want to hug you. OMG, I mean really. Alot of the stuff you get on-line isn't very good, but I totally couldn't stop reading. Ok, I have to stop gushing, lol, I'm embarrasing myself, lol. But seriously, good job.
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters. I love them so much!
Well, then, if you are current, the update soon!
I cant wait to read more! You are keeping me on the edge of my seat here.
(This story is my current and main story that I am reading in the naruto universe so update!)
Well, then, if you are current, the update soon!
I cant wait to read more! You are keeping me on the edge of my seat here.
(This story is my current and main story that I am reading in the naruto universe so update!)
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now that's just plain a cruel place to stop, it's a very addictive story- sure can probably guess the outcome but that just wouldn't be any fun at all, reading is so much more satisfactory.
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic. Don't kill anybody permanently and its 10/10 :D
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!! ARRRRGGGGHHHH!!!!!!!!! UPDATE NOW!!! I can't take it!!!! *cries*
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, another author with the ancient and rare power of "True cliff hanger". And you have mastered the art so well. It makes me want to shout to the heavens!
Any way, Great chapters. And damn what a twist. Althouth I do admit that I saw this as a possibility.
Well, dont leave us haning for too long, and dont forget to let us know when you update.
I have to say, this is one of the best stories that I have found, especially with the naru/hina paring.
Update soon.
Any way, Great chapters. And damn what a twist. Althouth I do admit that I saw this as a possibility.
Well, dont leave us haning for too long, and dont forget to let us know when you update.
I have to say, this is one of the best stories that I have found, especially with the naru/hina paring.
Update soon.
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story so far man good job. update soon i hate cliffhangers. dont let hinata die please!!!