rate_review Reviews

For gods sakes, please write more!

it's such a good story

Filler can be fun... crack filler is even better! yup yup it is!

So what's Kakashi gonna do? Is he gonna threaten Ebisu?

I don't quite get the reference to Ebisu being named after a fisherman friendly deity... is curious.

*cackle* PAPER CUUUUTS!!!! XD PAPER CUTS! PAPERCUTSSSSSSS! Oh...heee...sorry...I'm just looking forward to the next chapter and the one after that and the one after that! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Oh yeah, and that person who was bitching about sentences starting with And: it is perfectly acceptable to begin a sentence with And. If professional writers and journalists can do it, then it is certainly permissible in informal writing. So stop being a nazi!

XD

This story is soooooooooo much fun. Please keep up the good work.

Glad you're back. Hm... I wonder who he'll meet in the records room?

Hmmm- What's with the sentences starting in "And"? Is that intentional? Because if it isn't then I hate to tell you, but it's grammatically incorrect. Another thing, Ebisu?! Come on! Put a warning in the summary at least. Frightening images wont leave my head, and it's all YOUR fault! At least it was humorous.

I am speechless. A billin billion bazillion trillion million million x to power of infinity Oreos for this chapter!!! OH GODDESS! I am so glad i stalked you until you finally gave in and finished writing it. *blood* The way you write is superb. There is a sense of realness in your writing that makes one think that the characters are actually 3 dimetional and natural and not just minor fodder characters. I cannot wait to see what you do next! And omg. Izu/Ko/Ebi was just spectacular. You are evil for making it so teasy but that's what makes it so good! Most would have went all the way, but the way it turned out was perfect and actually what one would expect from Ebisu by the way you write him. *Ovation*

~Deadykins

You are so evil! No actual sex, you did it on purpose, i know you did. But it was nice, the dialogue was funny... ehhehehe matched set indeed.

Guess who! XD I finally finally finished reading your two latest chapters and i feel like a total ass-hat for not having done so before. XP You really shouldn't call them crap though!! They were both really funny! The way you brilliantly wove the Smurfs into you story was a strroke of beauty! And the Yamoto chapter turned out fine! i like his glasses fetish! XD Now I'm all sad because it's been a while since you updated and i need to know who Ebisu will be dating next!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! And no need t apologize about the lack of proper sex! Technically none of my stories have full blown sex either. XP Damn it all.

*Oreos*

~Dead

So funny. Can't wait for more. What's Ibiki's problem anyway? Stupid sexy jounin.