rate_review Reviews

HAHAHAHAHA! I hate you. I hate that i will read any pairing imaginable as long as it comes from you. YOu know, the number of stories i have read that have a Kaka/Iru type pairing can probably be counted on one hand, and two of them are yours. You should beam with pride and honor...if you want. XD Anyways, this chapter was very funny and the end made me be like "GAH! KYAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That's perfect!" You're evil. OH! OH! I think i actually forund a grammar error! *nod nod* YUP! I think I did! You havecousins as a possessive noun it seems like...but shouldn't it be either cousin's or cousins'?? How effing nit picky is that?? (O.o) Hee hee hee...i was just excited because i can never find errors in your stuff...which leads me to believe that I am probaly wrong about it but i had to say something just to make myself feel special. XD Wow, you are sure getting this one out fast!! That makes me happy. XDDDDDDD Keep it up Smurf-chan! Lusty Badness for you! ^_^

hehehehehe Let's just say that I love it and you need to continue. Not to mention, you had me rolling on the floor when Moegi pointed out that Ebisu was more flexible than what the picture showed. hahahahaha

Very interesting,your writing is seductive in itself cause the main character is an active hate of mine and I'm still reading.All hail fan girls.HAIL1

How can you say that chapter was crap? I thought it was great! XD I really can't believe it...you..you made Ebisu seem sexy and you wrote Iruka in such a way that i didn't hate him!! You are truely a genius! Yes you are. *nod* I love the way you write obscure characters. You have a talent for making them believeable and entertaining.

I can't wait for more!!! (as always) So crank it out! O___O *glare*

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So you DID start it! XDDDDDDDDD I wasn't expecting to see it so soon! Now i shall be waiting impatiently for the next instalment Smurf-chan!

So holy crap! What are you going for here like 5 or 6 chapters? Or like 10? *drool* Please...oh god...give me my fix of Izumo and Kotetsu...and soon! SOOOOON! I need them! I need them so bad it HUUUUURTS!

Tangent: (*looks at clock* 12:15 AM July 24th)...I totally forgot about Sasuke-kun's birthday again...damn it. Ah well...i did do that one thing i guess...bah.

O.R.E.O.S. for you Smurfy.

I don't think I spotted any grammatical errors... are you an english major or something? I liked the original, btw. You definately have a talent for the more humorous side of fic writing.

Squeee! Continue please! This rocks, and also I apologize for my earlier slightly scary fangirl squee. Obviously I would be part of Moegi's gang. lol. I've gotten to the point where I'm seen so much Sasu/Naru and Kaka/Iru that any other pairing is a treat. Don't get me wrong, I still like the classic pairings well enough, but change is good. So please keep it up! And I'm sorry for the pointlessness of this review, I know they say constuctive criticism is best, but I always come off sounding mean, so...yeah. Update Soon!