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for Eight Strokes

by Sapphirexkat2

schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My favorite part was the last line. It just...I dunno how to say it...it strung the whole thing together so nicely.

"You slut. You came in five." XD Funny.

I love Sasuke's very demanding neediness. It was very him. It was like he was trying very hard to be the one in control even while he's begging to have Neji inside him. Of, course, as we could see, he definitely was not the one in control. *smirk*

Good stuff. You're awesome. :D
person Chrysler
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a cute ending and I must say....after reading Want, take and..well, it goes like that, all I remember was hot Uchiha loving, but ahem, after that scene in there with Neji and Sasuke this was strange but I gotta say, I loved it again. Whorish---I say this in ANY positive sense of the word--Sasuke is tres, tres, sexy. Quite an imagination you have. ^_^
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*DROOL* there really isn't much more for me to say, because my brain can't process any more at the moment (NejiSasu overload). I must now go read your other fic.
person CMG
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For a pairing you don't like you sure write it well. LMAO. Bets always make the sex better. Laughs insanely.
person kiki
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woooooooooooooooooo! that was tooooooooooooo smexy! i need a fan!
person Anon
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHHAHHAHHA. oh my god. i almost died laughing... reading your A/N i mean.

"Plus I was watching the fight with Neji and Naruto in the third Exam again, and The 64 Hands of Hakke was translated as 'strokes'. so it was 4 strokes...8 strokes...16 strokes...32 strokes... and 64 strokes... I was like, gotta write this..."

*wipes tears from eyes* ... Damn you. And here I was rewatching the series since I got sick of the fillers. DAMN.
person roxaroni
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude. That was so good that I forgot the fact that Neji really gets on my nerves. I don't know why, I've tried to stop it, but with no avail. Anyhoot... this was great. It deserves to be fanfic royalty.
person Potemkin
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-waves frantically- My I love this pairing, but I suppose you know that. Very nicely written story. Totally worth reading. And best last line ever! Oh, Sasuke, you whore. -shakes head-
person kimyo ryu
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! please do more nejisasu! there arnt enough!!!!!!!!!!
person Sas-uke
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't see why not. This is a delightfully sexy pairing.