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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
when 16 chapter will be ?????....
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! you can't do that! you're leaving us with a cliff hanger. at least finish this story!
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooo..... I like your story
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed this story. I sad to hear you may not finish this story!!!!!!!
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dont stop writing *runs and cries in a corner* pweeaase *puppy eyes* i even made you a yummy and amexy narusasu chocolate cake *places the cake in faiths hands, no pun intended* ^_^
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September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah! I didnt log in but I would love to take your IMVU credits XD
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All of us who read fanfiction know( and I hope understand )that you can't force a story out. All I ask is that you don't forget about it. Its sooooo good!
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August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the coolest narusasu I've ever read. I hope you continue soon, I really want to see what happens next. oh yeah and I really like the way you turned
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August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the coolest narusasu I've ever read. I hope you continue soon, I really want to see what happens next. oh yeah and I really like the way you turned Sasuke Ukeish, you did a really cool job at it.
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Dances!*
KAKASHI XD!
NaruSasu SMUT XD!
BASHFUL SASUKE XD!
*Giant nose bleed*
I read my last review and decided to do a more detailed one for this chapter, including stuff about the last. Lovely chapters! The whole Kakashi-likes-Arashi is a new-ish twist and one I approve of. As much as I LOVE KakaIru, its nice to see a different pairing once in a while in Narusasu or Sasunaru fics. Kakashi seems a little OC in this chapter because I can't see the silver haired pervert begging for anything, but thats just me. Its great that Naruto supports the idea of Kakashi with his dad and I hope a little smut will make it's way in when Kakashi is ready to confess. *tears* Poor Kakashi... the dark haired/eyed cheater in the past should be kicked in the shins! I wonder who it is...?
Sasuke dancing in a shower is the best mental picture I've had in ages. Kazuki sounds absolutely gorgeous and the part where (s)he and Sasuke met was priceless XD. Miko's a cute one as well. Too many people just go "Oh Ino will be his sister" or something and an original family with their own quirks is honestly awesome to read about. Especially with the excellent way you write (credit going to your beta as well)... I'm still trying to form an opinion about Akira and Alia. I like them so far though... A mysterious briefcase? Hrmmm...
The smut was HOT and well written! It's good Sasuke is getting past the whole Gaara thing and letting Naruto get close again. I giggled throughout the entire part where Naruto teased Sasuke by not letting him kiss him. My brain remembered Sasuke and Naruto had a relationship before Naruto left but were they physically involved back then? Crap... I should go back and read that again.
OOH! OOH! I FORGOT NAO! Its sooo friggin cute! I want a little fox kit myself! Except for the sock pouncing part... I loose too many socks to my washing machine as it is XD!
Thanks for the update!
Ougon
KAKASHI XD!
NaruSasu SMUT XD!
BASHFUL SASUKE XD!
*Giant nose bleed*
I read my last review and decided to do a more detailed one for this chapter, including stuff about the last. Lovely chapters! The whole Kakashi-likes-Arashi is a new-ish twist and one I approve of. As much as I LOVE KakaIru, its nice to see a different pairing once in a while in Narusasu or Sasunaru fics. Kakashi seems a little OC in this chapter because I can't see the silver haired pervert begging for anything, but thats just me. Its great that Naruto supports the idea of Kakashi with his dad and I hope a little smut will make it's way in when Kakashi is ready to confess. *tears* Poor Kakashi... the dark haired/eyed cheater in the past should be kicked in the shins! I wonder who it is...?
Sasuke dancing in a shower is the best mental picture I've had in ages. Kazuki sounds absolutely gorgeous and the part where (s)he and Sasuke met was priceless XD. Miko's a cute one as well. Too many people just go "Oh Ino will be his sister" or something and an original family with their own quirks is honestly awesome to read about. Especially with the excellent way you write (credit going to your beta as well)... I'm still trying to form an opinion about Akira and Alia. I like them so far though... A mysterious briefcase? Hrmmm...
The smut was HOT and well written! It's good Sasuke is getting past the whole Gaara thing and letting Naruto get close again. I giggled throughout the entire part where Naruto teased Sasuke by not letting him kiss him. My brain remembered Sasuke and Naruto had a relationship before Naruto left but were they physically involved back then? Crap... I should go back and read that again.
OOH! OOH! I FORGOT NAO! Its sooo friggin cute! I want a little fox kit myself! Except for the sock pouncing part... I loose too many socks to my washing machine as it is XD!
Thanks for the update!
Ougon