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for Sensual Flame

by feisu

person AreYouLonelyForMe
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sign me up for that kind of torture as well!!!! Or is it women only? Ah!!!-pouts- That really sucks......Well anyway I really loved that chapter!!! Sasuke was so cute!!!! And Naruto was cute too!!!(though when isn't he?)I luv you and your beta for making this story happen!!!! Huggs to ya both!!!(glomps you) ^_-

-Jason
person Dragon
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter Sasuke was sooooooooooo cuuuuttttttteeeeeeeee in this one. I hope that you make this into a mpreg that will be so cool anyway keep on writing and update soon.

P.S. MPREG please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story and how it ended, but what's with naruto having feminine arms and hands? lol
person Andie
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I lovee Ukeish Sasuke XD

I like this story a lot! hope you will update soon ! -gives you love- XD
person yura (Sorry, to lazy to log in)
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!!

I'm so glad you updated!

I loved this chapter, and the little conversation at the end too!

Well I'm off to write some more, be sure to do that too Faith-chan!

Ja ne!
person yura
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you ask me you should continue!!
The story is great, it'll be a shame not to
person Anon
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm too lazy to log in, but I hope you'll update soon.

It's a really cute but sad plot-line, so I hope to read to the end and find out what happens.
person Leena
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It... it's interesting. But I was banging my head against my desk by the fourth chapter. Naruto's life is seriously Too Perfect. Everyone loves him, he's seemingly all knowing and mature and smirky, he's 'even be more loaded than Uchiha and Hyuuga together'. It's just... too much currently. At this point, I would pay to see him at least a little jealous, too. Really. Or uncertian, or irritated, or something. Sasuke can't be the only one with flaws.

...and I sort of miss Sasuke, too. All he's been doing is... well... being jealous. And Sasuke seems to have no friends D:.
person Leena
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yaay, something of a problem. And Sasuke, ya poor lil pretty boy u_u;. The 'looking through the window' bit made me think that someone else was stalking Sasuke, instead of Naruto as I assumed it would be. But, Naruto is still very calm seeming for a guy who was faced with the love of his life being raped. Quiet anger I understand, but I would think he'd be a little peeved just finding out before calming down.
person Wings
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg! I love this. Update soon!