rate_review Reviews

Omg! I love this. Update soon!

all i can say is....

OMFG YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE YOU GOTTA YOU GOTTA YOU GOTTA YOU GOTTTAAAAAAAA!!!
i luv ur story it's sooo cute... Sasuke a little wussy, but i kinduh like it that way cuz it just makes
him all the more cute, and he doesn't seem like such a emotionless bastard....the way you write, you actually give him some feelings haha....so...please update soon
i'll be waiting

;D

if you haven't found a beta, i will do it for you, just email me back. put the name of the story and your penname-author name in the subject so i know who you are pls.

You had me all excited; I thought it was an update! Oh well, guess I'll just have to find other ways to amuse myself, like being your beta, if you still need one. I would be happy to be your beta. As I said I really like your story and I would hate to see it not read. I’ll leave my email address, so if you accept my offer, send me an email. Regardless, my best wishes for you and your writing.


Dryad1789@hotmail.com

For the reader's benefit, I suggest that you separate the paragraphs with two spaces instead of one. It's hard to read when your story is clumped up all in one blocky chunk.

no dont stop. I must say that you are a very good writer at the end of the chapter you just cant help but move onto the next and then get dissaponted when you find out that its not out yet. so dont stop writing you have talent.

I love when Naruto is the "man" in a relationship x3, I hope you update soon "nods"

I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UP DATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The story is good so far and the last two chapters were great.

Alright, first things first. I'm very intrigued by this story. I like the role reversals that you've done with Sasuke and Naruto. However, you really need to find a beta. This is a great story, but the grammatical errors are really bad and take a lot away from the story. I noticed that a few chapters have been beta’d and I can’t help but find that hard to believe. The only thing I can think of is that your beta only checked your spelling and nothing else. It’s a beta’s job to also make sure the grammar is correct. If you find a beta that possesses good English skills than you could have gold here. Apart from that, I would really love to see you continue this story, and find a good beta. Good luck. My best wishes for you and your writing.


Dryad1789@hotmail.com