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hey i love your story hope you update soon is great thanks :)

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This is another really good story, I was bummed when I got to the end of chapter 6, I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.

Very interesting. I like it. It's soo funny and you really have every one's speach patterns down. I hope that you continue one day

owwww you could have Sasuke have a wet dream ^_^ (i love the way you write and understand that ignoring me is fine but i love you sex scenes they are so hot/ cute)PS i am not a huge pervert just a medem one who can not spell

I like this story. I feel for Naruto, and I feel for Sasuke, but I can understand where everyone else is coming from. I just hope it all turns out well. This story is very well written so far, I can't wait to see what happens next.

please do not leve this story it is well done and adictive. i love it and if you are posting somewhere else please tell me i would love to read more

i love this story pleses pleases keep writing

I'm really enjoying it. I love the child like innocence of naruto's character but find myself kind-of sad as well. I feel that even though sasuke loves and cares for naruto he's only in love with him only because he was in love with the 'old' naruto, not the one he has forced him to become. I know sasuke missess the real naruto, along with everyone else and the just makes me miss him all the more too. That's why i'm hoping little by little naruto will regain his memories of who he once was! All in all I can't wait till you'r next update, hope its soon!

LOL Pun intended?

He wouldn't lie; the last several days had been very hard on him.

I bet they were very hard.

Nice fic.