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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. Soon? Please?) I've loving this story so very much. I think the best part (at least, to me) is child-like!Naruto. I have no idea why, but I find him very sweet. Sasuke is so in character also; I was surprised 'cause even I sometimes make him seem OOC. Also, am I the only one happy that Sai's dead? (Not that I hate him, I just dislike Sai/Naruto with a passion. I rather read Sai/Sakura before that. -Is a secret Sai/Sakura fan for some reason-) Anyhoo, loved the update and I want another very soon. (VERY VERY VERY SOON.) -Cough- I'm done now.
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting fic cos the memory loss and new personality is always interesting. Tsunade should not worry about naruto never geting his memories back - old Naruto - real Naruto - was the way he was because of what he went thru. People he knew, places he've seen, life he lived. This child-naruto isn't the real naruto, cos living the life naruto lived it's immpossible to still be a child inside. Naruto never had parents, no matter how child like he acted, he wasn't a child. So real naruto is still sleeping somewhere deep inside his mind. The child-naruto is not naruto - he's too different from him, child naruto is the whole new personality. During his traveling with sasuke real-naruto wasn't able to wake up - there were nothing that made him the way he was (no hateful villegers, no lonlieness) - he could be a child sasuke made him to be. But by returning in Konoha naruto would be forced to remember - what it is to be hated by so many and loved by so few. So then he'd remember what it was to live alone, not protected, what it is - thinking for himself. So old Naruto will return. May be it all will start from the dream where child-naruto will sreak with old naruto. Thought, meow feels pity for him - it's truly horrible to know that you are not real.
And what sasuke did is just stupid - the child he creted is not his friend, he's just an illusion, on the inside he has close to nothing with naruto. When (if) naruto regains his old self back, sasuke should be happy - even if naruto will hate him, at least that'd be real.
And what sasuke did is just stupid - the child he creted is not his friend, he's just an illusion, on the inside he has close to nothing with naruto. When (if) naruto regains his old self back, sasuke should be happy - even if naruto will hate him, at least that'd be real.
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it.i can wait to know what happien
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!*grins* im glad naruto is back with his friends but its sad that he is without sasuke! i hope that sasuke starts missing him and returns. please update when you can! i cant wait ti see hat will happen next!
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm...I wonder what's going to go on between Sasuke and Naruto. I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait till you update again cause this story i really like. i wanna know what naruto is going to do now that he knows the truth. i can't wait. also keep up the good work
ja ne till next time
ja ne till next time
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chappie! Plz update this uber cool fanfic soon!!!! Or I'll go insane and commit suicide! @.@ Muahahahaha!!!!! J/K ^-^
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello again. It's your first reviewer from ff.net akume. Anyway, seeing as you'll probably won't be adding more chapters at ff.net from lack of reviews I've decided to switch sites. Okay, now that's out of the way I'd like to thank you so much for this exceptional piece though it kinda left you hanging in the end. Well, do keep up the good work. Until next time. Ja.
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really nice chapter, even though i was a bit disappointed that you jumped onwards for some years, but I still enjoyed the chapter, and it was enough explicative for me to know what had happened in those few years.
sasuke really cares for naruto, but i also think that apart this, his first thougth was still to get naruto to help him against itachi... he should have thought first of naruto... bad sasuke *sniffs*
it was fortunate of team Gai to be there (without Gai... phew) just so they met naruto, and i think naruto should feel devastated about that (even though, he seemed not completely shocked, i would have expected him to be more protective for sasuke).
a naruto childish like makes me feel both moved (as in, awwww! *melts*) and angered at sasuke. just because he had to control naruto (again, me wonders if sasuke really thougth about naruto's welfare before his needs), he made him childish and kind of stupid. that can be kind of cute, but it's wrong and in naruto's place i would be damn ashamed. BAD sasuke.
anyway, for the chapter per se, it was well placed out, and though the flow was snapped in two by the few years jump, it was still smooth and neat. i enjoy this fic a lot, and wish for you to update soon.
Ceph
sasuke really cares for naruto, but i also think that apart this, his first thougth was still to get naruto to help him against itachi... he should have thought first of naruto... bad sasuke *sniffs*
it was fortunate of team Gai to be there (without Gai... phew) just so they met naruto, and i think naruto should feel devastated about that (even though, he seemed not completely shocked, i would have expected him to be more protective for sasuke).
a naruto childish like makes me feel both moved (as in, awwww! *melts*) and angered at sasuke. just because he had to control naruto (again, me wonders if sasuke really thougth about naruto's welfare before his needs), he made him childish and kind of stupid. that can be kind of cute, but it's wrong and in naruto's place i would be damn ashamed. BAD sasuke.
anyway, for the chapter per se, it was well placed out, and though the flow was snapped in two by the few years jump, it was still smooth and neat. i enjoy this fic a lot, and wish for you to update soon.
Ceph
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! UPDATE NOW!!
okay...i had to get that out of the way...lol..this was a really good chapter (damn cliffhangers!!) so you better be updating again real soon 'cause i'm dying here...i need more!
okay...i had to get that out of the way...lol..this was a really good chapter (damn cliffhangers!!) so you better be updating again real soon 'cause i'm dying here...i need more!