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by kitana

person Anon
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh, there has GOT to be a sequel! >_< That was great; I loved the ending--it certainly leaves a lot to the imagination. I really want to know what happens next!!! >_<
person Phe (who is not signed in)
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me there is a threesome coming up, or something equally delightful. This was pure magic, and here's hoping we get hit with another spell soon.
person Nelly
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I hope you make a sequal, that would be AWESOME!!

I wish I was in Sakura's place. But I would have freaked at the last part. I can imagine how she felt when Naruto said she was out there. Oh shit is right lol. Make a sequal pleeeeease.
person Eizzie
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD oh shit run sakura!
person Anon
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it
person Lanier
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh, that was great. Any chance of a second chapter where she joins them?
person Shingo the Pest
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oops! Got caught~. ^_^ Sakura may wish she was Naruto, but I sure wish I was her! The emotional discriptions were stronger than the visual discriptions. That really worked, because anything sexual tend to have extra weight to it. So the physical lemon, and the voyeurism ended up balanced in the end. You did a good job on this.
person cve
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy damn, that's good. Sakura's just a fag hag like all the rest of us yaoi-whores. Great job on this delicious oneshot. ^^
person XXDarkness_surroundsmeXX
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow i smell a three some here. Plz let my wish come true... That doesn't sound so bad...hmmm. I love it!!!! please do a sequal. Maybe Naruto on top or three way. Your choice but this fic was fukin awesome!!!
person LadyApollonia
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO!!!!!! There needs to be more!!!! So fantastic...