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by Gloomy

schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very hot!! Love the way you wrote this! :)
person Rakuen Sora
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! You described everything so well, I felt my mind was going to burst! I also read your sequel to the story "Deepening the Bond" and I was quite impressed. It has been a while that I have read something that was done intelligently. Good work!
person Inus_Kagome_Forever
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good, thought it was a little hard to read. I didn't know it was going to be this kind of fic... just surprised me. But... gosh... I also think it would be pretty cool if you could make a fic out of this story. :\ ? ::hopefull::

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person Sapphirexkat2
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I think this captures Sasuke and Naruto's relationship perfectly... though I can't really explain how. heheh. Anyway, excellent one-shot!
person Teki
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so cool!! >< And sad!! T-T Sad because he only sees/fucks him once a year!! >< Really great job though!!! ><
person stormy
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that wasnt what i exspected i thought song fic and ravanous sex...well it just want a song fic, great job it was hot
person Tora
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm... I liked the idea...and didn't make a very good oneshot...but if you could make it into a story...me thinks it could be awsome ^-^
person Polka dot
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wanted something dark and this fit the bill, thanks!
person Kat
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yosh, very awesome. I like how it was summed up in the end in a fairly finished manner, short and sweet. Loved it -thumbies up-
person kyuubigirl
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was intense and very good. I don't even mean that in a shallow, short review kind of way. It just fits that definition. The raw passion is wonderful.