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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just keep the funny situations coming and all will be happy!
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great fic all i can say is hurry up with next chappy
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice story and hope to see an update from you. So Sakura is falling for Naruto now after the accident kiss and then the kiss they shared in the tree together. But now she is Jealous cuz the guardians of the Air country wanted to seduce him when she would of been happy but now she cares for him she doesn't like that idea from them huh
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the first Sakura/Naruto pairing that I've read, and to my suprise I really like it. Please continue. Update often. Thanks
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Tis Interesting. Keep it up!
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! The series of events leading up to the present are remembered well, written well, and the dialogue is real. Characters are definitely i character, along with simple events that keep the reader interested, for long periods of time. I check back every few days to see if you've updated.
Ok, one thing I had some problem with. The last chapter was really short. Oh, and if some reader checks into the reviews seeing what other people think about this story, in my humble opinion, this story is definitely a great read! Great job.
Ok, one thing I had some problem with. The last chapter was really short. Oh, and if some reader checks into the reviews seeing what other people think about this story, in my humble opinion, this story is definitely a great read! Great job.
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice update but you jump from being in the forest to in a village's outskirts and they have to fing four women and Sakura is now Naruto's fiance to enter the village and try to find the person they are looking for hope you clean the chapters up a bit and make them a bit more understandable. Great story though
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o you got to add a new chapter this is a great story.
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice story hope to see an update and like the way you had Naruto and Sakura kiss for the first time. Kinda funny that he is somewhat in an unconscious state and falls on top of her while kissing her at the same time. Hope to see a new chapter up from you on this good story.
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Great story love the minor things and the major plot line is funny and slightly romantic A+ keep writing