rate_review Reviews

Nice keep it up and ill keep reading :)

Please keep writing this. Nyao. I like it a lot.

Ahhh. Glad you put this here. It's impossible to wade through all the yaoi and horrendous stories to find something good, so I stick to the sub categories. Anyway, great story, though you have a little trouble with tenses at some points. They seem to work out as you get writing, but they're mildly noticable. Other than that, great stuff. Makes me with AFF had alerts.

Interesting that I'm the only one to review this. But this is turning out to be a nice little Saku/Naru fic. Dare I say it, even one of my favs. But i think you'd get better responses if you placed it in the Het section.