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for I couldn't wait

by Trollmia

person Yasu
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And everything was how it should be! Yay! That was so good, totally gorgeous and Sakura is such a pervert! X3 Loved it so so much!
person Sehne
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This sure was a very HOT one. Naruto and Sasuke are just one sexy pair. I wasn't expecting that at the end, which made me laugh hysterecally. I really liked it, so thanks for sharing!
person basilika
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hot, very hot. and nice ending! ;) I just didn't like the part about Sasuke wanting to cry.. Crying is so not Sasuke. Even if he wanted, he would never admit it even to himself.
person hisoka
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
tsunade and sakura are perverts...but theres nothing wrong with that
person Katie //_^
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how much I would have to bribe Sakura in order for her to make me a copy of that tape?
person Secret13
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the ending.
person Clemen
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you make Naruto the seme, most fics make him the uke. Good job. I especially like the ending. Very funny. Look forward to reading your future works. Until then, take care, and god bless.
person Yuri-san
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoot! Hot SasUKE action XD;
When you wrote what they where feeling, it was like poetry. X3 That was really good!
As usual, the ending was WIN!! XD
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot story, great ending :D
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well i liked your story.normally i'm not a naru-seme and sasu-uke fiction,but yours i like. oh and the ending was hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!