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for I couldn't wait

by Trollmia

person Tenshis_Darkness
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'Holding bucket for drool' You rock!! I don't see many NaruSasu fics, but yours was one of the BEST!!! I LOVE THIS PAIRING!!! 'Continue's drooling'
person Shosuro
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh My GOD!!!
That was wonderfully tasty!!!
I give you all kinds of props for that one!!!
Hope to see more stories like that!!!
That was HOT!!!!
person Kryos
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I LOVED IT!!!!! A+++++
person W
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHH YEEEEEAHHHHH! A tape! *evil snickers* Great job! Even greater finish! A little more plot than the normal PWP, but I ain't complainin'. Great job. Love your work, since even though English isn't your first language, your stuff is so well done anyway, with very little mistakes, and good structure and development. I like your writing a lot... wait... I already said that. ... Oh well, so I said it again. And I'll say this again too: Great job. I am looking forward to more.
person Elric Maxwell
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As always, you write some pretty hot fics pertaining to those two! Delish indeed! ^_^ EM(AlphonseE)
person akume
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Tell me they didn't just record Naruto and Sasuke having sex. LOL. I wonder if they'll tell them. Better yet why don't the ladies just have a gathering of all the female ninja and have a pleasure party and view said video. Just a thought. Though I doubt that'll ever happen. Both Tsunade and Sakura respect their boys too much to allow their private sex lives to become public. Anyway, thanks for the story. Wish there were more fics with seme-Naruto and uke-Sasuke out there. Oh well. Beggers can't be chosers.
person dengrymme
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you write so good! I can't wait to the second part!
person Hannah
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-snerk- Very good XD

Thanks for the great read
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha, så dum jag är ^_^ Här sitter jag och läser, och skriver tillochmed en Review (oinloggad förståss) innan jag faktiskt inser att det var du som var författaren =_= lessen...hehe. Har faktiskt tänkt skriva, för tack för din review, men har inte riktigt hunnit ^_^ men nu så; tack tack ^_^

måste säga också att jag verkligen gillade den här fictionen av dig också (skrattade åt andra kapitlets namn ^_^), liksom många andra du skrivit.

ja, vad de kommer undra här nu vad som står ^_^ haha