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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, there are a lot of people who like Temari/Naruto. The only goon one I"ve read is by Demongodofchaos, I would really love to read a T/N smut fic. From what you had in this chappie, I know you could do it well. I can only hope you will acknowledge my earnest request. One piece of constructvie criticism though: making a chap longer really would make it better.
-purebloodprince
-purebloodprince
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok make one lol tem/naru is my favorite parin to lol
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was a good lemon, and I liked the characters involved, but I think it sounded a little weird coming from a first person perspective as opposed to a general one.
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There realy isn't enough Temari/Naruto pairing if you ask me or Ino/Naruto for that matter so please contine.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEAHA YA!!!! write it plz. i will review every one
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the first lemon wasn't bad, but I found it lacking in background.
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
naruto and temari on there honeymoon but please add a new chapter
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kfj
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August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope to see more from you. When can we see another story of Temari and Naruto by themselves then accompanied by someone else this is ok but you just have to work on your writing a bit it is hard to understand what you mean in the beginning and please update soon
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This great. I'd like to see a Naruto/Temari/Tenten pairng. Keep up the excelent work