rate_review Reviews

This is by far the most ironically funny series of events I have ever had the pleasure of reading, thanks for makein my day.... well makein it just great. I really hope you post another chapter too, you can count on my readership. This is one of my new favorite stories.

I don't think smut will spoil the story at all. I vote that you include the Smut between Sasuke and Naruto. Hurry with the next chatper please!!!

Smut will definitely make it better. Will Naruto become Sasuke's protector and will he and Sasuke do the deed? Hurry with the next chapter!!!

i love this story, u have realy done a good job^^ and as for the smut i say go for it

Awesome

this is so hilarious! I laughed through out the entire thing. It's really good, looking forward to reading more of this. I'm just dying to know what 'Sasuke-chan' is going to do to Naruto (if anything at all).

I had to stop reading this story..It's horrible..!! Your lack of the english language is just so
bad that i can't continue on with this story..Grammar needs soo much work, that it, isn't even funny..

You story doesn't really make sense..I'm not sure if it's due to the grammar or just you, in general? I have
a feel its both..

God, you need to learn how to punctuate and fast!!

You story is also short, but that's not really a problem, just an opinion of mine..

Reason why you have soo little reviews, maybe..

You know, good grammar and storyline does help a reader enjoy a story, no-matter how awful or good it may become..It does help, trust me..I've read enough, god awful storys, that have god awful grammar to non-existent english writing author, yours including..

JoY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!XD I love your story. An update is like a rare desert. Please don't ever give up on this story. It has got to be one of the most original out there. Keep going Please!! Don't ever stop!!!

Yay!!! You're back.

Come on Sassy-chan I give you permission to molest him.