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pretty good :D

huh, never even thought of something like this. suffice to say it is very... different. I LIKE IT!!
i love how u took a new angle on things very good story and plot structure!
please continue!

great story so far pretty funny. I think if you went for it the story could easily be turned into a great naru/saku/femsasu fic ;)

hey great story. It's so funny *laughs* please update?? pretty pretty please with a chocolate strawberry covered... Gaara on top?? *huge chibi eyes* I'll love you forever *hugs* and give you lots and lots of candy??? maybe a whipped cream covered kankuro or kiba ill make oochimaru give u hugs??? any thing just please up date *grovels n begs*

Yay!! An update! XD Nice chapter, but PLEASE tell me this isn't gonna end up with Sakura/Kabuto. That's just plain wrong. -.-;;

Anyways, I look forward to the next chapter! :D

~KF~

P.S. When does the Naru/Sasu smut happen? O.o

It was good!!! I really enjoyed it! I fact, I always have, I only made an account between your last and most recent review, hence the lack of previous reviews. Don't be so hard on yourself, I found it utterly hilarious. please keep going, this is on my shortlist of truly excellent fanfiction, don't make it any shorter *weeps*
Oh, and take as much time as you deem necessary in order to keep up your excellent standard. ^_^

I'm so glad to have you back.

Wow. I must say, a hilarious story. As for the whole greater plot with the protectors and all, you could seriously do without it. You barely use it, it basicaly acts as useless filler, and you dont do a good job of presenting it. There is pretty of room for drama w/o that in it as well. As for the rest of the story, HILARIOUS!! I couldn't get enough of it. I was laughing my ass off pretty much throughout the entire story. But, i gotta say...Where's the smut? This is AFF and this is the perfect setup for a great smut story but, no smut. ......WHY???? You had me going there with the love potion thing but then you yanked my hope away. T_T I was laughing on the outside (but crying on the inside...*sob* T_T)

Please update soon, i'd hate to wait another year and a half for this to come to completion. 40 chapters? That's gonna take u awhile... So please, please, PLEASE, add some smut in before the end? Wherever is fine as long as its good....or long............or both........(giggles like Kakashi) But seriously, wherever is fine, but please do so. I read all 28 chapters u have in one go and .... no smut....(goes to a corner to cry)

Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sassy-chan is ALIVE!

And well even! I was wondering if Kabuto was going to be put back into the story, and yay he is! Though I was kind of confused at first, I had no idea what you were talking about. Not anymore though! I gets it!

As usual, very funny and thought provoking for this one, I enjoyed every second of it! I read it several times just to make sure that I understood everything correctly.

And your style has gotten so much better! Much more detailed and I'm proud of you! Lolz!

I await your next chapter with ants in my pants!

Please Regard Me Kindly,
I Agree

Now this is an interesting bit of fanfiction. Oh, and that quote at the end, fucking beautiful.