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for Sassychan

by boyarina

person Donedin
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so she finally knows. Thank god. I have been waiting for that, but never really expected the love potion thing.. good call. Cant wait for the hext chappy! ^_^
person IAgree
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How come you always seem to know when I’m having a bad day? ‘Cause whenever I’m having a horrible day, I come home from the Hell called work, I get an e-mail saying ‘New Chapter of Sassy-chan’ which immediately brightens up my day! It's like you have a radar for that or something!

Anyways… BUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Sasuke drank a love potion... which is an awesome concept when you think about it. 'He' drinks a potion that was meant for 'him', but at the same time... it really wasn't since Sasuke's a female! Complex of Confusion! I bet Sakura thinks she’s going insane (I know I would check myself into a looney bin if anything like that happened to me!)! Meh heh. And poor unsuspecting Naruto-kun (not really), he’s going to get molested by a sex-driven Sassy-chan (We all know that he’ll like it so, it’s not too ‘poor him’)! And Sasuke finally succumbed to the pressure of being female (at least he has sense enough to ask how to use a tampon, though)!

Sigh, poor Sakura, things just aren't going in her favor at all lately! What with the looking like death warmed over and such. Ah well, it amuses this one, so it must be good! Lolz.

Again, another fantastic chapter! I giggled the whole way through so you know that I'll be bouncing in my seat for more! (And will still be checking daily for updates even though I get e-mails informing me when you've updated...)

Please Regard Me Kindly,
I Agree
person Nellysan
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahah
I love the end!
Wow, another great work
Keep it up >.>
Looking forward to it!

Your loyal follower
Nellysan
person Anon
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have absolutely no idea how much this made my day! Work sucked more than usual this morning, so when I came home with my Mom baking chocolate chip cookies and an e-mail saying that there was an update for 'Sassy-chan', I did my spaz dance again! And might I say that I will never have a cookie again until next week... or tomorrow. Which ever. XD. This was the cherry on top of the fantastic end of the day!

I must say the chapter didn't go at all as I had suspected. Therefore, it was fantastic! I love surprises like this! Truthfully, I thought that Naruto would act completely different since he knew that Sasuke was a girl and that Sasuke would act more... girly. Fabulous surprise for me! Yay's!

The ending was utterly fagulous! I can't wait to see how Naruto gets himself out of this one (or if Sasuke will let him!). Poor Sakura, she'll probably be scarred for life after seeing that (I would just take pictures and hand them out to all the yaoi lovers out there XD. No profit though, all of the yaoi lovers must unite).

Lol, I can't wait to see the next chapter! I again wait impatiently!

With Lurve,
I Agree
person logophobia
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a friggin masterpeice is what this st0ry is
person Cam
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally to the good part...was kinda starting to drawl on and on there. Also Valley of the End not Valley of the Dead...unless your talking about soem AU alternative fight you just made up...and in that case not a very original name eh?
person IAgree
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Yesh! *Does her evil dance of glee* That was completely fantastic! Through both chapters, especially 23, I had a huge grin on, it was just so funny! I read them over and over again!

I feel kinda stupid though, because when I read the last portion of Chapter 22 heard about the blood puddle, it really didn't hit me what that was. I just thought, 'Hey, I don't rememer Shika or Sakura using a knife or anything like that.' So when I read the next chapter, I felt like an idiot. Not anymore though! Too happy! MUWHAHAHAHA! 'Boys' having periods! Hey, is Sasuke going to stay a girl now?

Anyway, what I suggest for your Sakura situation is to keep her in the dark for some time until you can think of something that you like... and have everyone (Sasuke mostly) make a fool out of themselves as they try to find out/hide Sasuke's secret. It could be fun! Especially if you keep everyone but those who know now in the dark too! *Thinks on it* Though there could be down sides. I don't know what you are planning for the future (not prying! I love surprises anyway!) so I can't give you concrete advice. That and I don't know whether or not you wanted to get it out of the way or not. I do see a cry fest in the future though.

YOU ARE THE BEST! I LURVE YOU! YOU MADE MY DREAM COME TRUE! *huggles her 'Sassy-chan' and 'boyarina' plushies while still giggling evilly* Meh heh heh.

Keep going and know that you have my complete support and fascination! I shall try not to tear things apart with my impacience to write more!

Please Regard Me Kindly,
I Agree

P.S. You are not alone in your fear of stairs! I was doing the stupid thing and dancing down stairs that were covered in carpet that isn't too stapled to the stairs anymore (old house) and I slipped. It was nothing too major (or at least I thought), since I just bent my pinkie toe the wrong way (not giving details in case some people are toe-phobic like my friend). I wasn't bedridden, however, I did get this massive bruise. So I feel ya on that fear, I really do!
person Nellysan
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh...dear...
Sassy just got molested in an alleyway...
Go Naruto! The only peice of ass you can get!
person IAgree
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAHHHHH!! *banging her head against the table* DAMN CLIFFIES! THEY ARE EVIL! EEEEEEEVIL I TELL YOU!

Now as a writer of fanfiction myself, I understand that cliff-hangers are a vital part of the equation for a good story. They make people itch for more, and I appreciate that and use it constantly. BUT I HATE THEM NOW! ERG! *Rolls around on the floor in frustration* The tables have turned on I Agree!

Yeah, it took me awhile to write a review, sorry. I have the weak excuse of: Whenever I sat down to write one, something either too amusing for my blonde mind or dire came up... Yeah... bad excuse.

Weird thing though, I will admit that what caught my eye about 'Sassy-chan' was that about a year ago I had this idea that 'Hey, what if Naruto was originally a girl, and Kyuubi didn't like that when he was forced into him? Hey! Let's make it so that Kyuubi made some 'adjustments' and then Naruto's aura was getting stronger so he was unknowningly correcting all the changes!' I thought that was a huge coincidence so I was like 'Oooo!' (Funny, I had actually completely forgotten about that fic until I saw yours). I don't think it would have mattered anyway, I had never planned on putting it up and still don't.

Anyway, good luck again and know that you have made yourself a very big and loving fan who waits to cuddle the next chapter! (poor Sakura! I can't wait!!! I hope she's not too heartbroken... but I know she will be... *sigh* Star-struck girls...)

Please Regard Me Kindly,
I Agree
person shadowkitsune686
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry up and write the next chapter I LOOOOOOVE this stroy
So PLEASE do'nt stop!!!!!!!