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well,we have a very clear idea of where Itachi is coming from ,although there is very little mention of Sasuke..Who seems like a bit of a pet himself.Is he smart,beautiful,vivacious,?We will get to know more later I guess .Little sexual detail which is rather disapointing,confusing too,why would the others be so hot for him if he is such a "dead fuck"I am surprised Oro "sucks" in bed that bad if he is that old/experianced,its not like he is ugly.Hearing about Itachi's new power to mesmerise coming to him was interesting,very.Meeting the others was not that interesting though I am sure there is a reason,for example the twincest was new therefore a growth on their known characteristics,Tayuya swearing for no reason,cliche.The fat guy telling that girl what to do all the time makes me sick to my stomache.What a nerve esp. considering whats going on around him!Its ludicris.All in all a very solid start the flow was good except when you reiterated characters we know about and set up sex scenes only to bail but they are not your main pairing anyway.I am really looking forward to the rest of this.Good luck and I hopeI didn't offend,it is not my intention at all.Thank you.

Hey..It's MissMayumi! Umm..I love this story so far!! Haha I hope you can update soon!

Uh, so are you going to update this or what? Man, you're really rubbing off on me with this darkfic/ItaSasu stuff. Can I tell you that I am almost ashamed to admit how much I liked that part in the first chapter where Oro was, uh, sliding his tongue into bloody orifices? Gyah. And I actually haven't read any other vampire fics, though I read the Vampire Chronicles like before I went to junior high. (which explains why I'm super perverted now). THANKS A LOT, SHEESH. I mean, woman, update your damn stories! You must have stories posted elsewhere, ne? I've never really gone to just regular old ff.net. I'm kind of set in my ways here. I'd like to read your other stuff *winks* teehee

This Anne Rice -style vampire lore isn't exactly my cup of tea (just saying ^_^). But you write it so well. I just love your style! And you write so long chapters too (I'm not good with that) *grumbles to knees* You got Kimimaro there too... I'd like to see more of him, with Itachi *drools* And one last word: HOT! I'll be waiting for your update.

OMIGOSH! Geez, Poor 'Tachi.. Orochimaru needs to die! I hope he kills Orochimaru or escapes soon.. And I've been wondering if you could maybe show what Itachi's family is doing since he's gone and stuff. =)

-Jamie

Ahhh please update!

THis is a very intriguing story, I can't wait to read more. :) It sounds like Deidara is a very violent little vamp.

yeah.. another hot, yet awesome chapter... as usual.. i am so glad you decided not to put in that.. *ahem* one part that you were thinking of putting in that i said NOOOOOO to..cause i would have died.. like wowness.. dude.. i cant wait to see Sasuke in this fic. it is going to be sooo hot.. and the ending of this chap??? OH MY FUCKING TEZUKA! it was so hot.. i had never thought of Deidara like that.. but woooot that was hot.
keep it up and bring it on!
-ren

Oh so good. Very very good. Delicious. Please keep it coming. Its a very nicely written and very original fanfic. I want more pleez. Update soon

>O< This fic is really good. I love Itachi. ITACHIII VAMPIRE <3
What's Sasuke up to while all this is happening. A part from his POV perhaps?