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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liked that a whole lot . i can't wait to see what happens next please UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Usuratonkachi - moron of morons
teme - bastard
dobe - dead last
you want to define the words for your readers you should know the correct definitions.
teme - bastard
dobe - dead last
you want to define the words for your readers you should know the correct definitions.
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Rather than putting this in my A/N, I thought I would put it here.
To "snow_angel"
Thank you for your...critique, I guess. However, my definitions of the words were perfectly fine.
Teme, actually, is a vulgar form of "you" used by young males. Thus, "Bastard", "asshole", "jerk" is perfectly fine for the definition.
And well, as for your explanation of "Usuratonkachi", it can mean "Moron of all Morons" or "dumbass" (as I said) if you want to put it briefly, however, it really is a made up word by Sasuke. "Usura" is a derogatory term used in many insulting phrases like "Usurabaka" (dimwit) meaning "dim" . Tonkachi is the word for "Hammer", commonly used in phrases like "you swim like a hammer" . So, really, there is no 100% correct English translation. Unless you would like to say "Dim Hammer" but I doubt that is what Sasuke was going for. I would have put this explanation in my footnotes had I felt it needed such an explanation, but it didn't.
And as for "Dobe", I never even used the word in my fanfiction, and I know the translation to it. No need to point it out to me if I didn't even use it or define it incorrectly.
Not to sound arrogant or mean but next time, if you are going to correct someone, please make sure that they need correcting first.
~ Twylight
To "snow_angel"
Thank you for your...critique, I guess. However, my definitions of the words were perfectly fine.
Teme, actually, is a vulgar form of "you" used by young males. Thus, "Bastard", "asshole", "jerk" is perfectly fine for the definition.
And well, as for your explanation of "Usuratonkachi", it can mean "Moron of all Morons" or "dumbass" (as I said) if you want to put it briefly, however, it really is a made up word by Sasuke. "Usura" is a derogatory term used in many insulting phrases like "Usurabaka" (dimwit) meaning "dim" . Tonkachi is the word for "Hammer", commonly used in phrases like "you swim like a hammer" . So, really, there is no 100% correct English translation. Unless you would like to say "Dim Hammer" but I doubt that is what Sasuke was going for. I would have put this explanation in my footnotes had I felt it needed such an explanation, but it didn't.
And as for "Dobe", I never even used the word in my fanfiction, and I know the translation to it. No need to point it out to me if I didn't even use it or define it incorrectly.
Not to sound arrogant or mean but next time, if you are going to correct someone, please make sure that they need correcting first.
~ Twylight
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Quote "Sasuke was easier to turn on than a light switch" unquote.
That was hilarious!!! I looved this chapter, even with the "lack of sex" you mentioned. A threesome for the next chapter sounds awesome. It took you a long time to update this, but since it was an awesome chapter I'll forgive you, but please update as soon as you can!
That was hilarious!!! I looved this chapter, even with the "lack of sex" you mentioned. A threesome for the next chapter sounds awesome. It took you a long time to update this, but since it was an awesome chapter I'll forgive you, but please update as soon as you can!
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HELL HOT!
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! I just remembered my password... lol I was reviewing before as Anna, anyway! Are you updating this one soon? I don't think it's a one-shot, and it is way to cool to leave it as one! Please update as soon as you can!
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I just love Naruto/Sasuke pairings.^^ I think Naruto makes a much better seme than Sasuke. hehe^^ That was a hot chapter and I can't wait to see how mind blowing the rest will be. ^o^
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O Wow. I dub thee fic Best FanFic I have Ever Read and I've only read the first chapter. Good job and I love you. I really do. O.O Wow.
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wah~
that was hot!
loves it!
..and was that a TBC at the bottom of the page?
T..B..C..?
you mean there's more?!
wai~
*dies happily*
that was hot!
loves it!
..and was that a TBC at the bottom of the page?
T..B..C..?
you mean there's more?!
wai~
*dies happily*
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was uberly hot.....I await the next chapter!! =D