rate_review Reviews

Stylistically, it wasn't confusing at all. I write like that too. The thing that threw me, and maybe this is just a personal preference, but I just hate it when people call each other "pet." For some reason, it just grates on my nerves. But aside from my personal pet-peeve, it was an enjoyable read, funny in some parts.

Tense, you expect us to focus on verb tense when you've got Kakashi whimpering and tied up by Iruka? Sorry, but I was too busy getting aroused to pay the slightest attention to tense. Use the pluperfect if you want--whatever. Yummy! Thanks for sharing!

This was some of the most delicious and steamy smut, Iruka was very sexy and Kakashi was so gullible, I can't believe he was played so easily. I thought it was really well written and you should definitely write some more!

^^ I've gotta admit I'm more of a Iruka-uke fan *he's so adorable*. But this was fantastic *soooo hot*. It was ingenius of Iruka to continuously make Kakashi feel guilty with his tears.

Lol, I've got a question regarding the position though. Maybe I'm just incredibly naive, but is that position possible? "..and his mouth keeps itself occupied on the upper part of his body."

If it is... HOW SUPER!! XP!!

Thanks for writing this!

Finally an Iruka seme!!!

I liked.

Good job!

It was great i think i liked Iruka as seme,and though i usually have bad time trying to understand stories written in English i had no such problem reading yours.And scenes was gorgeous for someone who has no experience in sex-well i have no experience either ^_^-