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You're doing good so far. Nice plot development and you're building the tension quite smoothly. Now I'm wondering what Itachi will do to poor Naruto. Keep it up.

Yosh! Give me more.

OMG! An update! This keeps getting better and better hehe...

Interesting begining, meow likes it. Thought, it's highly doubtfull that Naruto could be broken by Itachi. Naruto lived in hatred for almost all of his life. Itachi is not important enough for Naruto to break him. Itachi found himself a dangerous toy to play - not because Naruto is Kyuubi's vessel or a strong shinobi, but because Naruto can change people, it's the most interesting in him. Only 2 chara's in Naruto-manga\anime can do that - Naruto and Orochimaru. And Itachi is not the type to think for himself - sure his all cool, strong and alone, but he always follows someone. He's the one to serve, thought, he does it for his own reasons. Meow means first of he served his family, than Akatsuki leader. Naruto is his opposite in this - he does what his hert is saying, he's the one to lead others.
So Itachi soon be influented by him. It's good for him that he captured Naruto and not Oro, cos even if Naruto changes people he makes them happier. Oro just uses them as tools.
Naruto's strenght is that he stays himself nomatter what. You can beat him, tourture him, rape him, but still be Naruto. And that's what changes people. Meow's thought - Itachi will willingly give his life for Naruto by the end of the month!

This story seems very interesting. I hope you find the time to update. If you can, please send me an e-mail when you update.

My e-mail is:
justice02908@yahoo.com

I was going to review the first chapter, but I decided to wait for an update, as there wasn't much to go on. Anyway, I'm very interested to see where this story is going. There is a serious lack of good ItaNaru fanfiction, and it's usually due to the characters being way too OOC. But it seems like this is going to be one of the good ones. I'm glad that there's going to be no rape, although Itachi seems to have some very evil ideas brewing. XD If Naruto is kept in character in this story, then Itachi's set himself an impossible goal for 'breaking' him. Heh heh! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, so please update soon! XD I'll be sure to review again.

I really like how you're putting this together. It seems promising. I'll definitely be checking up on this one.

you're doing itanaru... you're doing itanaru *falls on knees and worships*

every author that writes itanaru has the right to get me to worship them. itanaru is my OTP. (and i only write of that so XDXD) <3

anyway. the start was a bit short for my craving, but i still loved it. the writing was smooth in its pace and flowing and the last line was quite a bit unexpected, and I was left blinking. ^^ love.

i think I will just love where this is going, and be assured I'm going to follow you through this fic, and force you to write it. understand? ^^ *huggles*

can't wait to get more of this. it was really a good chapter that is a promising start for a great fic. post it on FF.net too. there you'd get tons of readers.

Ceph

shit, half of my review didn't show up.

anyway,

i wanted to say that the plot, the flowing and the pace were absolutely smooth (even thoug I felt sad the first chapter was so short), and that the last line was quite a bit shocking and I was left blinking.

<3 love.

i also want to say that this is a very promising start and I'll love to follow this as you write, and even force you to if you don't *smiles brightly*

see yah then, and post soon. i really loved this. please! ^^

Ceph

Well written, and interesting! It's a very good start.

Ah, if only I had a dime for every time Naruto wanked in a fic...poor boy. :p