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for Fateful Snowfall

by LadyQuotes

person Josh
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like how your making this into a more of a romantic story for those two but I like it anyways... Hope you update it soon
person BradenIsMyMonkey
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very cute chapter! Update soon. ^-^

*~~BIMM~~*
person Josh
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope your chapters are a bit longer but other than that it is a great story your writing. Hope to see an update from you when you have the time to do so. and I hope to see this story becoming a great read and some lemon in it soon or fluff whatever people call it... Keep up the great writing.
person Hestia
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I haven't read anything since only chapter 1 was up--wow up to chapter 4! I love it when the ramen boils over--that line is awesome about Naruto having never been distracted from ramen before. This is so cute, so WAFF, so romantic!! I can't wait for the first date!
person silent pluto
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whew hee, hee, hee
this is getting fun!
You gotta update! Please! Pretty Please!!!
person BradenIsMyMonkey
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This chapter was so cute. I love it! I am looking foward to another update from you.

By the way, about the cabin they are in, is it an abandoned cabin, or the owners are just not there..Curious...^-^;

*~~*BIMM*~~*
person solar phoenix
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I usually hate Naru/Hina fics,but this one is pretty good. I hope you update soon.
person Josh
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice update but I hope the chapters are a bit longer than they are now. But I am happy that something is going his way andNaruto should be happy with Hinata. Hope to see an update when you have time.Keep up the writing it is good
person negro_damus
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ur cliffties r killing me...... plz update !
person Al
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Nice to see another well-written Naru/Hina story here. There are surprisingly very few. And I'm sorry, maybe I missed it, but is this before or after the timeskip? Anyway, Looking forward to more.