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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Looks like an interesting way to start off something like this ^.^;
Update soon ja?
Update soon ja?
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
not to be mean, but someone has written something like this before on mediaminer...
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seems promising
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice start--very nice, good stuff! It might be nice to have some idea of what Naruto thinks of Hinata--maybe even memories of the chuunin exam when he first started to notice and care for her. More please!!
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD A CLIFF HANGER I HATE CLIFF HANGERS PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS.
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very interesting...you should really try to make it more...describtive...ya know more detail to it...but so far its nice...reminds me of another fic i read on media miner...*shrug*...can't wait to see more...update soon...see ya...
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good job thus far. Tiny tip in regards to hypothermia: setting someone beside a fire is actually very ineffective in treating hypothermia. Bathing the afflicted in hot water is much more effective. It could also lead to some interesting circumstances. Just a suggestion.
Keep up the good work.
Keep up the good work.
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good so far, keep going
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please keep going its a good looking story. its very well writen.
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested so please write more soon. Your start of the hypothermia cabin fic(aka blanket scenario) is good. keep going I look forword to the update.