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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS AWESOME
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sweet update soon
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It entertains me to no end that people dislike Sakura so much, but whatever, as long as people write stories, I don't care. Other than a few typos in the last couple paragraphs, nice work. Oh, and I think there's a point where you just have to say "no" when using the term "bitch". After a couple times, it get repetitive and cheesy. But, I really do like it, and I hope you continue.
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Where's the rest of it?
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, didn't see the date. I was up writing at that time too. Good work on the opening, look forward to the rest of it.
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm not a bad start please update soon =)