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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I totally love it. I hope you will continue.
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh no !! i think this is actually pretty damn great, so yea AU cause thats fairly unlikely to happen but thats why its FANFICTION.....anything else is just dull.
So yea pleeeease keep going i really w ant to see more of this, i t would be so great. Maybe a little more interaction between sakura and the brothers would be good, and more dialogue would help fill it out. Some parts seemed to have been dropped and could use more description especially the first three or four paragraphs.
Then again thats completly up to you.
Cant wait for the next instalment
krickitat
So yea pleeeease keep going i really w ant to see more of this, i t would be so great. Maybe a little more interaction between sakura and the brothers would be good, and more dialogue would help fill it out. Some parts seemed to have been dropped and could use more description especially the first three or four paragraphs.
Then again thats completly up to you.
Cant wait for the next instalment
krickitat
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it! =o
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I'd like to read more.