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July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really don't know what to say XD
is was extremely good i was fully drawn in for the whole story
the way you write is very fun and passionate
although i see what you said about the end i actually like the end, because sasuke deserves something better than naruto, although i wish sasuke wasn't left hurt it was nice that he did end it with so much passion (got to say that blow job was amazing to read XD) an ahh am so glad that gaara became part of the story he is so cute
really enjoyed this and will continue to read
is was extremely good i was fully drawn in for the whole story
the way you write is very fun and passionate
although i see what you said about the end i actually like the end, because sasuke deserves something better than naruto, although i wish sasuke wasn't left hurt it was nice that he did end it with so much passion (got to say that blow job was amazing to read XD) an ahh am so glad that gaara became part of the story he is so cute
really enjoyed this and will continue to read
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG...death by blue-balls? You crack me up. And I also liked that Sasuke said he'd had better. HEheheehehehehehehehe. Just had to say that. I'll do a big review for the end. ^_^
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Evil, evil woman! You know that people are going to find you and mob you for more, right? Guess it's a good thing I know where you live....
(evil laugh, echoing through a long hallway...creepy music in background)
*cough*
Ahem...I liked it. Only one question: how did Gaara know his name? Didn't he forget the nametag? Uh, oh! I smell...is that...*sniffles*...is that a sequel?
Great job, hon.
A
(evil laugh, echoing through a long hallway...creepy music in background)
*cough*
Ahem...I liked it. Only one question: how did Gaara know his name? Didn't he forget the nametag? Uh, oh! I smell...is that...*sniffles*...is that a sequel?
Great job, hon.
A
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woot!! you finished it finally!! i gotta say dude, it was awesome. glad naru's karma caught up to him so quickly. (lol, monkey poo... XD) he was a bit of a scumbag in this... hot, but a scumbag... >.> i like the way you told us what happened through sasu's convo with kakashi and shika... and lol @ shika's screenname, that's awesomesauce. the way they talk to each other is cute, too. i love the haigusha and shika's "dork, we're a room apart but i miss you too" lolol
and now in comes gaara, seemingly ready to sweep sasu off his feet with his reptile-loving, anime-watching/collecting, redhaired, blue-green/robin's egg/sea green/aquamarine (lolol) intense eyes, hot bod and disarming half-smile. woooooooot!!! yesh, sidefic ish a must, nya!! i demand it!! (but, yeah, don't forget bp! i miss it soooooo, like you have no idea dude, sooooooo much)
until then, congrats on finishing a fic!! *salutes you* *glomps you* *lurves you*
&hearts
~ lg
and now in comes gaara, seemingly ready to sweep sasu off his feet with his reptile-loving, anime-watching/collecting, redhaired, blue-green/robin's egg/sea green/aquamarine (lolol) intense eyes, hot bod and disarming half-smile. woooooooot!!! yesh, sidefic ish a must, nya!! i demand it!! (but, yeah, don't forget bp! i miss it soooooo, like you have no idea dude, sooooooo much)
until then, congrats on finishing a fic!! *salutes you* *glomps you* *lurves you*
&hearts
~ lg
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What can I say?
Gaara is a perfect choice! ^^
I've read the whole thing and it means I like it much, it has good plot, great characters and for once, Sasuke isn't the bastard, not reallyXD
Gaara is a perfect choice! ^^
I've read the whole thing and it means I like it much, it has good plot, great characters and for once, Sasuke isn't the bastard, not reallyXD
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha i love my screenname! it totally fits man.
mmmm gaaaaaara
i can see Lee saluting sasuke too.. hahaha
i love your non-description of his eyes.. that is fucking hilarious to me...
awww gaara with the Leopard Gecko is so cute! This was a good story dude.. i am kinda sad to see it go, but you ended it with style
you should do the gaasuke (or sasgaa)side story.. but work on your other stuff first...
like BP..
or TTAATT... been forever since that one...or any of them
anyways, good job tsuma.
-Shika
mmmm gaaaaaara
i can see Lee saluting sasuke too.. hahaha
i love your non-description of his eyes.. that is fucking hilarious to me...
awww gaara with the Leopard Gecko is so cute! This was a good story dude.. i am kinda sad to see it go, but you ended it with style
you should do the gaasuke (or sasgaa)side story.. but work on your other stuff first...
like BP..
or TTAATT... been forever since that one...or any of them
anyways, good job tsuma.
-Shika
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful story and I got some helpful tips on different pets for my daughter,THANKS!!!! I love love love the idea of Gaara and Sasuke together. You have to write this fic out.XD *begs and pleads on hands and kneeswith head bowed down to your feet*LOL
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EPILOGUE!!! It has ended??!?!?? N0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0oo0o0oo0o0o0o0 but...i just found it, and now it's over? Meanie :( I love it! It's wonderful
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'm going to review the whole thing soon but I just have to say that this ----> Once things quieted down, he looked over at me and I looked over at him. He waved. So I waved. He smiled. So I turned back to the TV because Fullmetal Alchemist came on. ----> made me laugh my ass off. Me and my friends do this ALL the time. LOL I'm happy to hear that we are not the only once that do it :)
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April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was soo excited when I saw that you updated! YAY! I check all the time. It's became such a routine and (sorry to say) I always felt disappointed to see that you hadn't updated. (Not that I can talk. I still haven't uploaded anything yet. I will eventually! My thoughts are scrambled)!
That chapter was really good. Not just because there was something umm... well, physical, but because you established what thier relationship had become and how clear Sasuke's point of view of Naruto is. Hmm, I don't know if that made any sense, but I'm trying to say that I love how you've written beyond the sex (even though they did 'technically' go all the way).
I started reading your story because I like your writing and the idea was fantastic. Who would have thought there wouldn't be any other Naruto stories about an affair (well written stories, anyway)..? This story has a lot. It's sweet, cute/hot, funny (? I think I remember laughing... It's been a while since I've read the whole thing), serious, immoral (hehe) and completly PAINFUL to read. That's painful in a good way :) Keeps you on the edge.
Once I started reading this, I couldn't stop. I was dying to know what happened. I must admit that I am a little shocked at how abruptly it ended, but well, if that's your writing style, I guess I'll have to get used to it. I am confused though. Did Sasuke mean the end of their 'affair', or the end of that hot session (as in he was tired and he's established that he's having an affair with Naruto..? That didn't make sense, did it? DAMN! My thoughts are scrambled!)
Anyway, I guess it's like you said. I'm just gonna have to find out when I read the epilogue... :S
Hope you update soon. CAN'T WAIT!!
That chapter was really good. Not just because there was something umm... well, physical, but because you established what thier relationship had become and how clear Sasuke's point of view of Naruto is. Hmm, I don't know if that made any sense, but I'm trying to say that I love how you've written beyond the sex (even though they did 'technically' go all the way).
I started reading your story because I like your writing and the idea was fantastic. Who would have thought there wouldn't be any other Naruto stories about an affair (well written stories, anyway)..? This story has a lot. It's sweet, cute/hot, funny (? I think I remember laughing... It's been a while since I've read the whole thing), serious, immoral (hehe) and completly PAINFUL to read. That's painful in a good way :) Keeps you on the edge.
Once I started reading this, I couldn't stop. I was dying to know what happened. I must admit that I am a little shocked at how abruptly it ended, but well, if that's your writing style, I guess I'll have to get used to it. I am confused though. Did Sasuke mean the end of their 'affair', or the end of that hot session (as in he was tired and he's established that he's having an affair with Naruto..? That didn't make sense, did it? DAMN! My thoughts are scrambled!)
Anyway, I guess it's like you said. I'm just gonna have to find out when I read the epilogue... :S
Hope you update soon. CAN'T WAIT!!