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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was so cute with them sleeping together. I like how fast you update and i have to say that your story is my fave at the moment. I'm just wating for them to kiss. Your good at building up the sespence and i just want the affair to start already lol. I like Hinata i really do but i like SasuNaru so much more lol. SASUNARU 4 EVA. Ok that was a minute of madness. Well anyway all i have left to say is 'update soon'.
(PS> Sorry for any spelling mistakes)
(PS> Sorry for any spelling mistakes)
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! It continues...
But... If Sasuke has dogs, then why he never go to walks with them? O.o And what about his other animals? He never seem to take care of them...
But it's good fic :D
But... If Sasuke has dogs, then why he never go to walks with them? O.o And what about his other animals? He never seem to take care of them...
But it's good fic :D
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really like your story, its so funny and cute. BTW I love snakes and can't see how anyone can hate them. Sobs at the cruelness of the world. ANywho can't wait till next update, Ps i'll act like im in withdrawl until that time. Sighs, woe is me.
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hell Ya another wonderful chapter heh its wonderful especially
with my four year old nephew over tryign to kick my ass thinking Im so
stupid villan from Kids Next Door......
Anyways a perfect 10.....
Hope to have more soon ^-^
with my four year old nephew over tryign to kick my ass thinking Im so
stupid villan from Kids Next Door......
Anyways a perfect 10.....
Hope to have more soon ^-^
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter! I like how you got Sasuke and Naruto interacting with each other. Its cute.
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it so cute i love this story more please
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have a nice idea going but your story gets boring at times with all the 'Sasuke at work' details and the mundane conversations (characters in this story seem fond of spouting out variations of "hey, what's up" with a replied "nothing" a lot). I'd suggest cutting out a lot of those work details (especially since the majority of them don't seem to add much to your story) and beefing up the conversations.
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oi...that was awsome! Please update agian, I canna wait to see what happens in the morning! *winks*...now, THAT, should make for an interesting chapter, ne?
SeeveredWings
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was great. Sasuke sure has a lot of animals. Me, myself, I always wanted some kind of lizard, or even a snake. Think they're cool.
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story is great so far and I really love it. I love Sasuke's personality, as I've few AU stories that change his personality from what it is on the show. I agree with you that without all the 'brother-killing-clan-thing' Sasuke would probably have a personality something like the one you've presented. He's cool. Love Naruto too! He's kinda cold about Hinata. What's up with that?