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Great character development, love the way ytou take real life experiences and transpose them into your stories. Adds realism and depth, I enjoyed it!

I agree with Naruto, anime shows are not cartoons! I mean, if someone insulted Gravitation like that I would definetly get into a slagging match with them!

Amusing story, not enough to make me laugh or chuckle out loud but it has the potential, humour is hard to write on a constant basis. I mean, TV shows hire people to make up jokes! Unfortunately as an unpaid author you have to rely on your own skills.

Hopefully we will get some hints towards the actual 'affair' soon and Hinita will die in childbirth leaving Naruto and Sasuke to raise the kid because she annoys the hell out me! Especially that twiddly thing she does with her fingers and how she always blushes when Naruto so much as looks at her!

Sasuke's evil when he's a work, but I geuss anyone would be high strung working late nights with people that don't do that good a job. Naruto is fast becoming an intresting character to read about, he has such diffrent attitudes when it comes between Hinata and Sasuke. Well anyways, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Oh, and that mini rant was rather entertainng.

That was wonderful ^-^ it keeps getting better and better.

Gods men are such pigs!
See I was playing volley ball in Gym and this guy kicks the F-ing ball right in my tit!

Guys think just because they have balls and chicks don't it don't hurt well there dead ass wrong....sorry...*twitch*

Also Major Game freaks who arn't anime otaku's and only like a few anime...are asses to...a friend of mine I was ready to ring his neck I might add was like people who right Anim Fanfiction arn't anime Fans at ALL!

ok sorry but seriously your fic is getting better and better and I look forward to always reading more.

Ah! That’s so mean for Hinata! It makes me cringe. But I'm gonna trust that there's more to it then you've so far written.
Naruto was so cute with the water bed, and then the silly little argument over the typing.
It's little things like that, that make a story for me; it's not just the big scenes but the slightly eccentric, attractive moments that happen when everything's normal - relatively speaking – that keep you reading a fic. You have that down to a fine art.
Please write more.

waa!..Woot for Nauto/Sasuke ..bonding?..lol
Poor poor Hinata...never thought she would be that clingy..but it's ok...cause no one likes her...ok I do a little bit but, pssh it's still only Hinata.
and how 'bout that airline food...what's up with that?..o.o'

--sorry..just rambling..another review..so you update faster ne?..hehe ^-^

I loved the story. It had a very real feel to it. you go girl!

awwwwww man i love this fic *gives giant thumbs up* and why does sasuke have to be so mean to his employees? i mean its not very nice to throw flee medication at people..... my store manager neer throws fish bowls and air pumps at me ( not that i would want him to) but yeah is hinata pregnant 'cause i remember u sayin something bout them expecting ? or something like that and wouldnt she like confront him about totally blowing her off? but anyways i geuss im just rambling ....keep up the good work.^.^

---N.P

hey i love this fic and i just think the story is kinda hilarious and the fact that everyone is an anime fan make it better and next time i have a beer i will definatly have to see if it smells like pedigree.lol>

Mooooore! I love this n__n