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by Houseki

schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love the direction this stories taking - I'm not really sure what to expect.
The little ficlet was cool; it would be nice if things worked that way, at least for some.
I really enjoy the way you write the characters, and though they are obviously different from the manga and anime, it's more like what they could have been, which is perfectly right. The only issue I have is with Hinata - I hope you don't hurt her to bad.
The way Naruto and Sasuke interact is wonderful - the relationship feels familiar even as it's new, to them and the situation.
Please keep writing!
person Tora
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woot for side fics! *\o/*
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hehehe...hope you write more soon..cause I luffs it x3
person Tora
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwww....My poor cheerleader got like....blown up T_T
person Heidi
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is soooo yummy! And it's written well, too! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Happy Writing!

~Heidi
person Kitsune_19
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was really really good and i love the way your building up to the main event. I cant wait till Naruto cheats on Hinata with Sasuke. I hope you update your next chapter really soon. Oh and did i say -I LOVE THIS STORY-. lol bye.
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lmao! now you know how hard it is for me not to ramble on for a page when i do my rev' rep's! esp. to people i know, or my fav reviewers! it's funny to see you do it too *giggles*

anyway, yay for you putting ch4 up *happy dance* i totally giggled at the cartoon vs. anime thing, and sasuke's guilty pleasure bein' reading/writing fanfics XD aaannnd *ahem* i can totally relate to sasuke's need to sink his teeth into somethin w/vamp movie.. though as you know, gender wouldn't/doesn't deter ME muwahahahahaa (only my *excellent* self control can save you there heheh)

and now.. yes, you should write ch6... and ch7!! and.. lol however much else.. nyaaa i need to get my ass to work on ch5 then, eh? weeeell.. i will soon! got a few more up'ds to read nya..
*huggles*
~ lg (lmao caught myself almost signing my real name, like on icaf posts *facepalm*)
person aimee
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
such a cool story, i no they're ooc but i still love it, its nice to see them in different settings once in a while. i never normally write these things as i don't know what to say without sounding completely lame-ass about it, but decided that this def needed some recognition and i cant wait for the 'cute lil shits' ^_^ to get it together!! aimee, x.
person Pic's Pixie
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh i so love this story, very interesting idea havn't come across it b4, and so true about that whole 'anime not cartoon' thing, and i absolutely love how adorable sasuke and naruto were being at the end all cuddly and stuff, hope to see more of that , maybe so more then cuddling action :P *wink wink* but i do wonder? who's seme? i'm a huge sasuke being seme fan but i like both please update soon, loves it muchly
person Rei
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry about the chap not comming out yesterday
I wouldn't have been able to read it anyways I had
my four year old nephew over...XD

And Today is great timing heh....this whole waking at 5:30am
is throwing my 'I'm all here' thingy....
and I'll tell you when Im tired I can act pretty damn wierd.
To much Sugar makes me *rolls wrist* slutty.
Caffine Makes me tired.
Sugar little or not depending on my surroundsing doesn't make me hyper.
and
Tiredness makes me...wierd/slutty/pissed off....

a wonderful way to start the day..

Can't wait for more ^-^
person digi-girl
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, intresting...A Sasuke PoV story. I like it, really I do. Maybe it's beacuse even though Sasuke's still a bastard, he's a anime fan like so many of us reading; or maybe because the story has the promise of an affair, i love reading about affairs. How is it that i can hate real-life affairs, but love them in storys? Eh, who cares? It just gives me more of an incentive to read the up coming chapters.