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Not logged in right now, but after reading your rant, I thought I'd do the honorable thing and bestow upon you my appreciation and admiration for your fic, and your generosity in uploading three chapters in one day. Not too many people do that; mostly, I think, because the majority of people tend to write their fics chapter by chapter, and that can be somewhat...time-consuming. I myself have been unable to write anything for over a year now.
If it's any consolation to you, I've watched as other authors put up fics and had no one review them for DAYS, even though the stories got a decent number of hits. So obtaining 8 (not counting this one and the three others that have been added since) in one day is pretty darned fantastic, if ya ask me. Here's hoping that you don't abandon all hope like so many of us have - keep up the good work!

This is very good! I hope you'll continue soon. One question: the baby that Hinata is expecting...? O.o Isn't that an obstacle...?

Dude I love you not only to you update fast but
you have such a good taste in what you write...
anyways I hope tehre will be a new chappy when I get home from school tomarrow gods knows I probably be having computer/fanfiction with draws until I get to my baby *pats computer*

hmm.. yeah dude, i went to check your reviews this morning *being nosy beta again* and i was like :( no new reviews :( :( *sigh* so i hope you get some more today so you'll put up ch 4!!

anyway, still lmao at the cowboy boots trippin naru up :p and his 'oh-so-convenient' habit of driving around near sasuke's house.. *cough* can't wait for you to put up next chap!

*sends subliminal message to all readers* reviewreviewreviewreview

lol.. not so subliminal :p
*hugs*
~ lg

The plot is interesting...but you know..you ought to re-read the whole thing...It's really confusing in some places...Sometimes I can't really tell who's POV your writing in until you mention someones name...you might get more people reading the fic that way...

You can always send me an email or something if you want any help(not that I would be much help but either way)

Hmm... I like it even though not much happens. I guess it is supposed to go slow at first, so it's fine with me. I like the tiny hints you put here and there, like Naruto riding around aimlessly when he should spend time with Hinata, but it's obvious he prefers to be with Sasuke. I like stories that demand that I use my braincells :)
I really, reeeealy like the casual, down-to-earth style you keep the narration in. It's Sasuke's POV so it should be expected. I miss humour a bit because I just always considered him to be a dry humour guy. But hey, maybe he just need to loosen up a bit? let's give him some more time ^_^
But there's one thing that seems a bit off to me. Sasuke is a bit too amiable and outgoing, not because I care about canon, no, no! Don't get me wrong, I'm sick of avenger-boy characterisation! What I'm pointing out is that he's so nice that the fact he doesn't have many friends doesn't seem all that plausible you know?
But all in all I like it and I'm very curious what's going to happen next, so hopefully you'll get tons of reviews and you'll update soon :)

Its good....

I love that expression "cute little shits"

lmao dude, you DID post it!! (at least ONE of us posted today like we said) it was so good dude, i loved it.. and yeah, sasuke OOCness, but i still love it and can see him being this way if he was more mellow, so it's all good.. and lol, naruto was very naruto *cough*

..so good i completely didn't do any beta-ing lol,*forgot*, so mayhaps i shall go do that and leave edits in our IM as per usual (got some tenses to watch, my dear ;D) so now, i MUST read more!! and i wonder when *ahem* kakashi comes into all this.. heh :p but anyway, i'm so glad this lil story seems to write itself, so you better continue on this roll cuz i don't wanna hafta wait some BP-like-months for more, tezzie dammit!!

ok, /rant
lol
*hugs*
~ lg

Waha!....Sasuke likes Harry Potter!...~imagines sasuke in a wizards hat and robes~...seems like he'd fit right in at hogwarts...meh Xp...did I sound like too much of a nerd there?...ah well. Great story though..hope to read more :3

Its getting better and better everytime.