rate_review Reviews

yeah.. i snuck on, and thought... i gotta read it...
ok...
so...
there were a few parts in this where i dropped my fork. (currently eating chicken salad and mac and cheese...mmmm) and a few parts where i literally bit down on my fork...and you KNOW i hate that feeling/sound...but it wasnt in a REALLY bad way.. i was just...ahem....picturing certain situations and whatnot.. naruto is a sly soul isnt he? and poor sasuke...got to get off and then just go to bed...tough life.

but i love it sista.. please write more when you get the chance.. between your training classes and extra work.
much love
renaru

YAY U UPDATED!!!!!!!!!! ^O^ now more pwease and get rid of hinata shes getting in the way of them. poor naruto

I fuckin LOVE this story!!
I love Sasuke, Naruto, how Shika's Sasuke's roommate and especially your writing!
I know, morally speaking, I shouldn't want Sasuke and Naruto together, but... well, they're two (Sasuke being IS the hottest) of the most fucking hot characters ever and the way you write just... *takes deep breath* they HAVE to get togeter!
I can't tell you how much I can't wait for you to update!! So, please do your best and thanks for the story!

Wow...this story is pissing me off!! Not your writing or anything...it's VERY well done. What's pissing me off are the choices the characters are making, because it's SO believable. Naruto is a downright selfish jerk (isn't Sasuke the usual one with that role...it's awesome that you switched it up!) Hinata knows there's a problem in the relationship, and instead of kicking him in the balls, it sounds like she's doing the whiny naggy thing that causes most people to drift even further away. And above all, Sasuke, I think I'm maddest at him because he KNOWS that this is BAD and he keeps inviting Naruto back. Hinata is in Naruto's bed and Sasuke lets Naruto into his. WTF?!?! So, like I said, the story is so aggravating because I know where Sasuke's coming from and how hard it is to push someone that you're so comfortable away even when you know it's the right thing to do. I can't wait for more updates and see where this is going to go. I like you're writing style and how realistic you've made everything. Well done!

I have just come across this story and read thru all *13*Chapters and I must say.....
I looooove this story!!!!!I like what you have done to Sasuke,even his *girly* side...
But,just out of curiousity,I have to ask 'whats the back story with Hinata and Naruto?'
Is he really a big slut?Was the baby a trap to keep him interested?Just wondering why
Naruto is going elsewhere.....Like I said,I'm loving what you have done with the characters
anyway......But,I hope that you get rid of Naruto's *discomfort* soon,LOL!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!

KEEP GOING and update when u can :)

Gah, totally in love with this story. Mind you i'm going stupid Naruto doing stupid things, Choose damn you!!! but if it was quick and easy, it wouldn't be real and would be no point to the story, so as much as i hate the suspence and the torture I am enjoying the story completly. Can't wait for your updates! *.*

Erm... welcome back. I'm not really good at reviweing, but I do enjoy this story. My favorite line(s):


I wasn’t expecting what happened next. Naruto apparently likes dirty talk in bed, for he began to moan at my words, sending a vibration from his mouth, to my cock, to the volcano in my stomach. And the eruption was intense.


I just loved that. All of it. I'll keep looking out for your updates. I missed this story.

i read this fic on fanfiction but i hadda read it again here

OMG HAWT!

But for once I can't help but hate Hinata in this fic!
I usually love sweet poor innocent hinata and you made her some horrible fiend
from hell...kinda like how people make Sakura and Ino the fangirls from hell...
Oh well please update sooner next time.