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for The Affair

by Houseki

person llyoung
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a fun story. I enjoyed reading it and I'm looking forward to the next update.
Thanks for writing.
person Sekre
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, really love where this is going :)
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha, for the first time I wish I could hate Naruto, I really do, but I can't! I love him but I can't stand him. He reminds me of one of the epitomes of types of guys I automatically cut off. Just because I detest their habits and their actions. I don't care what his reasonings are, or if Hinata is a real bitch in this story. I can't stand Naruto, i wouldn't give him the time of the day, even he promised me the world. It would be extremely scary to fall in love with someone thats willing to do all with his affairs, but doesn't give a flying fuck of his serious commitments. Yet he doesn't leave hinata. It just sounds to me he uses her to keep all affairs from becoming serious. I dont care, even if he is justified, if I was Sasuke and coudln't help be attracted to him, I STILL wouldn't let him have shit.
person SMercury
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Write more soon!!!! Also keep me updated, because I love this story. Ja Ne.
person Jennifer
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YATTA! I'm really loving this story, though (ithinknarutoisn'tsuchanass) although this is AU. So it's ok! But yeah... I lurv it so far though I hope Naruto doesn't hurt Sasuke too badly. That would make me cry and... well... yeah. UPDATE!
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is CMG but since i cant be anon anymore(must be logged in to review blah blah)i am now cloudhawk >.< Well i'd like to first welcome you back from what we like to call the "real world" (seriously who needs that place). Nice chapter btw, im up at 3am reading it (will be so tired tomorrow) but it was worth it. Oh well till next time. ^*^
person feisu
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey :)

Love the story. You know, few days ago I was thinking about this story and wanted to reread it, but I forgot its title, though I was searching for summary as "pet shop" or something lol I couldn't remember and I felt bad, since I wanted to reread the hot make-out session between them, and then you update. Like you knew it, or I did. I have this thing, I start to remember a good story and want to read more of it and the next few days there is a new chapter for them. Weird. I hope you update soon :) I wanna read more of your imagination and such. :D NaruSasu woot!

ps: NaruSasu and SasuNaru... (more NaruSasu *cough* )
person loche606
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wooot.. another chapter done! fina-fuckin-ly... it rocks, as per usual. now... get your ass to work and start writing more. and more. and more... and not just on this fic.
im so proud that you got this out. its wonderful ^__^
waiting impatiently for more.
-renaru shosa
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ugh dude, first off, do you know how much the beginning of the chapter gives me flashbacks? off-off brand vodka is NOT fun whatsoever, it ALWAYS makes me black out like that. i hate when i hafta ask jpop what happened the night before on the morning after, and i always feel like he's not giving me the whole story. totally feelin' for sasuke on this. and did naruto really forget? he's so sketchy >.>

nyaaaa next chap, next chap soooooon *bats lashes*
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow i think i read this story a while ago like somewhere else i think. Its so trippy, i as wondering what had ahppened to this story too. Then boom its back on when i sign on. Anyway, great update. And finally the feelings are out in the open. Sweet. Update soon, and dont get lost again!