rate_review Reviews

all i can say is HOLY SHIT THAT WAS A GOOD MAKE OUT SESSION BIT. above average...mmm. anyway i think that this story is pretty good, but you seem to be giving a little more oc leverage to Sasuke then i'm used to seeing, but i'm digging it, so it's ok.
P.S I WANT SASUKE IN MY PANTS. and naruto wouldn't be to bad either.

So I'm reading this and I'm like...HP, pets, plants, adult swim, anime, screwdrivers, and APC???? Man these are my kind of people. Hahaha. Anyway, I'm loving the story, very well written. Thanks so much! Especially if you're working and have little spare time...*hugs!*

I didn't realize this was an AU fic when I first decided to read it. Something interesting about me and AU fics...I've tried reading a few over the years, but I didn't like them. Was weirded out by them, really. I figured Hell would freeze over before I actually found an AU fic that I liked. Well, Satan's upping his thermostat right now, because I am HOOKED on this story. I don't think I've even read a non-AU Naruto fic that I liked more than this...so, I don't what it is about this story that I love so incredibly much, but I am eagerly anticipating an update for this wonderful fic. *applauds* Well done!

*drools* Oh damn that was HOT, lol. Wow. Ok, I must say that I for one am loving the direction the story is going in! This was a really great chapter, if only Sasuke's conscience hadn't ruined everything <_< This is kinda like when I read the manga Not/Love, and really, I should be saying "No! Go back home to your family, you two-timing jerk!" but the yaoi fangirl in me only thinks of the hot smexing that could go on between Naruto and Sasuke. *sigh* so screw fidelity, SasuNaru FTW!! :P

It was freakin awsome!

So here I am 2:30am no 3am in the mornign and can't sleep on a school morning/night
and No matter what I do I can't fall asleep I ever tried warming up milk XD...

But one thing came out good me reading your new chappy ^-^

oh good news...
soo teh freshmen at my school look like boble heads (cracks up)
they ahve like these overly huge heads on these little stick bodies and then they carry around like two ton book bags....

I know I was a freshmen only recently but still....I was playign volleyball one day in gym and these freakin immature idiotic bobble headed freshmen took out ball so I ran after the shortest one and screamed like a little girl and dropped the balla nd ran (cracks up) it was freakin hilarious!

Oh and this story is gettign better and better every time I read it ^-^

O.O............O.O wow.. ok then. *ahem* ummm you know who i hate? Shika... and you know why??? cause his punk ass always seems to be gone... wtf is goin on with that dude? Troublesome.
you know what else? Sasuke... would make me quit a job due to bitchiness.. that would make me crazy... anyone who can reprimand me for 10 minutes and isnt my parent...yeah, wouldnt deal with it well...

but anyways... awesome chapter... always is... you rock it out baby! *hands on head* KAWAII.. funny! hot! yeah, you know.. all that jazz...
well, it is time for bed now
oyasumi nya
-s.n.

That was great! And yeah, Naruto was way more handsy in this chapter. Was it just the alcohol, or was it something else? Because, before, there was no alcohol involved. Hmmmm, very interesting.

ok, everything i said in IM while i was beta'ing still applies, plus: damn i'm glad i worked in a 24 hr store so we never had to "close" and i didn't hafta put up with *my* supervisor/manager bitchin me out over shit.. i'd have barely kept my job for my "attitude" coming out at that.. nope, couldn't work for a sasuke.. and DAMN naru really is a lush.. and ewwwwww off-off brand vodka *blacks out from just thinking about it* omt and then drunken-horny-hotness dude.. ok, you already know what made me lmao in that bit, but other than that, putting it in the context of the actual FIC *cough* it was *so hot* gahh and i know it's awful of me but damn sasu's conscience there >.> but then.. err.. considering what naru had to go and do next.. i'm glad more make out didn't ensue after *gags* err so.. lol it's been awhile since i rev'd on aff instead of tonfa.. post this chap there already woman!!

*huggles*

~ crys

hurray for the new chapter! Naruto's getting daring but Sasuke's still weary, it's getting intresting. I'd say more but I've got one nasty headache. So with that I say nice chapter and I'm looking forward to the next installment.

Well you beg so prettily for reviews, have to write one. I'm a fan of more adult stories, but you managed to get me to read 9 chapters without even a kiss or grope yet, so I have to say you're a good writer. But I don't like Naruto as a slime ball so much--can you think about giving Hinata some better fate? I guess Naruto has to be slime to keep the tension going, but Hinata is pregnant and deserves a break. What can I say--I like NaruHina as well as the two Naruto and Sasuke combos. Seriously though, should Sasuke be getting a bit more aroused by the tickling? I guess he's too proud to let himself get turned on . . .