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Momogi is so cute! Momogi cupcakes for you! Love this!

Hi! I enjoy reading your your fanfic. I've just finished reading chapter VIII and one thing left me puzzled when Shikamaru found out about the baby. Why didn't anyone wonder how it could be that a man could get pregnant?! It would have been nice if there had been an explaination to that question.
But maybe there'll be one in the following chapters. Maybe I'll just keep reading.
Besides this little issue I really enjoy reading your fanfic!!

Oh my gosh. That was absolutely sweet. At first all I can think of Kankarou is why is he still denying that he is gay after what he has done. And I congrates Shikamaru for holding on that long, and i totally admired that Temari beat out. I have not yet read once where he actually put her into the hospital and this was a relief. I enjoyed it very, very much. I love it even. I feel bad for Naruto since he is still waiting but the role that he played is major and totally him. Also, Lee has the least tacts ever. I am so glad that he won't change though. And that crude comments about Shino and Kiba sex life is more that need-to-know information. Overall, this exceeds my expectation when I was just reading the summary and I do not regret clicking this link.

I have never be so glad to read so much blood and gore in my life. I was smiking the whole time the vilaion was geting guttend and being riped to shrieds. I feel compltely and uterly staisfice with that ending. I love it. You did a great job. I am going to go now and look for more of your work. Fantstice Job!

yay!! kanky killed the whore-bitch!! i'm sad that it's over, but it was really cute. yay, cute fluff at the end!! they're all happy now!!! ^_^ great job on this story!~

Your story is great! please update soon.

She would definitely be dead once Kankurou and Shikamaru gets their hands on her. hehe.

Can't wait to see what Naruto would do. Update soon.^^

Ooooh....Me likey =3

*evil grin* Kankruo, can you PLEASE let me watch while you and Naruto open a can of whoop ass on Chisuru? Oh, and PLS bring Ino in on this! I bet she's itching to get the person who was ultimatily resposible for Shikamaru's getting pregnant...I still think that plant had something to do with Kankuro and Shikamaru's daughter being born! Last i checked it's plain impossible for males to get pregnant! They don't have the right parts for that! I know that the duo love their child, but i think Shikamaru would have prefered to have a choice in the whole matter...

YES!! naru and kankurou are gonna kick some hussie ASS!! WHOOTT!! i was SO pissed when i realized she was stealing the baby! i was all like 'oh, bitch, no you DI'N'T!!', but she totally did! but now there's gonna be some butt whoopin' by kankurou and naru-chan, so it's okie-tays!!! ^__^ ...well, not really, she DID steal a baby... but, well, yeah, you get the point!!~