rate_review Reviews

*cracking up* I'ld GLADLY pay to see Temari as Kazekage! Women CAN be kage! Tsunade's living proof! *muses* Is it just me or is Naruto acting more mature and quieter than usual? I know he's grown, but he seems so sad and UNLIKE himself! PLS set him up with someone! As for Kankuro-well having his mom die in childbirth and the yondaime kazekage for a role model, cannot have been good. WHY not have someone-Ino give him books on parenting?

This latest chapter is quite good. I like the interaction between Lee and Naruto, and I always thought that Temari was meant for great things. Maybe she could have the position permanently and Gaara could join Neji in Konoha, that way there would be someone to give Kankurou crap.

I really like this story. Can't wait to see more.

woot! baby! this should be interesting >:)

By the way PLS write ANOTHER KankuroShikamaru LEMON!

Thats probably the shortest reaction-to-male-pregnancy scene I've ever read. It was a little dissapointing, considering the personality in the other chapters. I'll still be reading the story tho, eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

I'm very disappointed this turned into an mpreg. I won't be reading anymore of this. I advise you put a warning in your summary.

I really like the story, and the pairings that you have it in. I do feel like explanations are a bit rushed, making me a bit confused to why something happened (one example: I don't mind M-preg most of the time, but like some explanation for how it happened since it can't just happen in nature.) It would have been nice if the aphrodisiac had something to do with how it came to be...because he took so much of it and it had an unexpected side effect. With such interesting ideas, I hate to see them rushed. :) Please write more, I will definitely continue to read.

*grins* I KNEW it! *LOL* A tumor? *snickering* Loved Shika's reaction! Anyway, SO is the message for Kankuro? *whistles* Lee and Naruto BETTER make certain Gaara IS there, to catch Kankuro if he faints! Cuz the news is going to be one hell of a shock! *snickering* Gaara is going to be shocked to find out he's going to be an uncle in about 3-5 months...PLS include a chapter on Shikamaru's food carvings! I really want to see what kind of strange food combo he eats! Plus it might be intersting to see Naruto and Co's reactions...

I was diggin' it! Until the M-Preg. Not my favorite type of fiction.