rate_review Reviews

Whoa! I really liked this story, for the short-ness of each chapter, and the excellent choice of words, it really delivers. I absolutely love Kankurou, and Shikamaru, period. He’s awesome. I have nothing but positive feelings for this fiction, although I would like to ask you a question, or rather, I’d like to know your reasoning for liking Neji and Gaara being paired up together.

Just to question that couples popularity.

But Neji in a dress, that’s comical, I loved it.

But if you had the free time, or just feel like responding to this, could you please send me an email on your theory of Neji and Gaara. Just out of curiosity, I’d like to know. Anyway~

Ja~ Respond if you wanna.

*shakes head* I KNEW it! By the way, if the 5 says Chisuri is a hallacageon. THEN the rest of us readers were imagining her, when we read all about her! There's another explaination-she is a BIG fake! But I would love to know how she was able to walk in a hospitial full of ninjas! Surely someone WOULD have noticed her! Unless there was some kind of incident when every available medic had their hands full...As for Shikamaru-if I didn't know better I would swear he is pregnant, unless you decided to throw in a twist...To Anon-I have always wanted to see Shikamaru as a uke, and him being pregnant! It fits his personality...Since i have a hard time seeing him as a seme, since he says everything is troublesome, I think he would prefer someone else to be in charge... Besides I want to see his reaction to him being pregnant, cuz it means he gets to see HOW women feel, while being pregnant! *evil laughter*

Oh good!
Neji and Gaara are married, now? Sweet.
And Shikamaru and Kankuro. Good pairing! Update!

I'm so glad you updated!! Please don't make me wait so long next time!!

Please, please please, DO NOT MAKE SHIKA PREGNANT! You already made him bottom! -sniffle- He was my sexy seme. But, I like the story. But, I don't like how you made them love eachother so quickly.

OOOOoooo and the plot thickens. Nice Job.

Cute NejiGaara moments! Update soon, I'd like to see what's going on with that Chisuru character!

A unique paring. I used stay away from uncommon parings but ever since I read a wonderful Gaara/Lee fic I have become more daring. You learn that a wonderful writer can make any story interesting and enjoyable. You definitely did that here. I also loved your Gaara. Are you planning any possible fics in the future with him as one of the main characters?

Yay, can't wait to see Neji in wedding dress. Kankurou has to learn to use lube and to do some stretching. Hopefully the bleeding isn't anything serious. Update soon ^__^

Dum dum du~m!! I can't wait to see what happens now? And who's bed are they in? What if the blood seeped onto the bed?! What if Shikamaru's hurt? Like really hurt!! What will happen now? I must know!! I need another chapter soon! Please update, ASAP!!!