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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now I really like this story. I like where it is moving and I like the pace. Great job.
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg so hot... *fans self* great pairing! I love the mentions of the other couples, I don't suppose you'd write a bit on them too? please? I love the line about Naruto's orange track suit suddenly making sense. lol. great stuff.
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good and I can't wait for more! I loved the description. Kankurou's refusal to admit his own sexuality was sorta funny. What got me was that it seemed from what you showed, that all the males in Konoha were shagging one another. That's too funny! XD
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more. ^_^ This is turning out to be really exciting.
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Um...this is an interesting idea. Never really thought of Shikamaru and Kankarou together, but now that I read this, I guess it's one of those extreme situation things, and it's believable enough. The style is great. I love the way you're writing Shikamaru. It isn't often that you see him being vicious. And Kankarou...he's great like this. I always suspected that he was a perv, but not that he would be fighting his sister for Shikamaru. All in all, great job. Keep it up.
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
New favorite pairing. <3
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, I think I kinda' like this. Can't wait to see what you do next.
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it!Love it! So funny and cute! I can't wait to see what you come up with next! Update soon!
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your style of writing, compared to many in the fandom this is wonderfully raw, and I like your word chioce. Nice job.
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aw, poor kankuro, getting threatened with death and the removal of various body parts. Though shikamaru probally would be the only teenage ninja to pass up sex like that. But even though the chapter was a bit on the shot side it was to the point and actually quite humorous, i'm looking forward to the next chapter.