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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He he... Shika-kun reminds me of a disgruntled tom-- hissing and spitting. So cute. XD It seems that Kankuro has a deathwish or just can't leave well enough alone!
I like what you are doing so far. Please update soon. ^^
I like what you are doing so far. Please update soon. ^^
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is certainly an original pairing... I'm looking forward to seeing more. Shikamaru gets so little love T_T
You've got a good story going so far. The plot is sort of an overused PWP thing, but you're stretching it out a bit. Also incorporating different characters. XD It's going to be more than one chapter, anyway, which is a good sign. Keep it up, I'll be checking for updates.
You've got a good story going so far. The plot is sort of an overused PWP thing, but you're stretching it out a bit. Also incorporating different characters. XD It's going to be more than one chapter, anyway, which is a good sign. Keep it up, I'll be checking for updates.
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT! more, more! :)
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm, an interesting pairing, and quality writing. It's a good start.
The way the chapter ended could use some polish, of course, and I do hope this has plot in it (Kankurou has will power, man, c'mon), because the writing is solid and it's a rare pairing. Make it catch on!
The way the chapter ended could use some polish, of course, and I do hope this has plot in it (Kankurou has will power, man, c'mon), because the writing is solid and it's a rare pairing. Make it catch on!
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O-ho~ I'm rather intrieged, two of my favorite characters slashed together, now that's brillient. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.