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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter two review-
this was great...i love the way you did different views...it really set the story right...i never really thought of Temari with Hinata...i usually like Temari with either Shikamaru or Tenten...but i can really see this...ya know the tough girl with the quiet girl...sounds sweet to me...update soon...seeya...^_^...
this was great...i love the way you did different views...it really set the story right...i never really thought of Temari with Hinata...i usually like Temari with either Shikamaru or Tenten...but i can really see this...ya know the tough girl with the quiet girl...sounds sweet to me...update soon...seeya...^_^...
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay for chapter two! I've never had anyone reply to my reviews before, thanx! That was really cool, made my day. So, a review about the fic! I always knew Hinata could read people; she's Neji's cousin after all! And her outfit, I can picture it, really lovely. Temari's is more sexy sounding, and it fits her personality! This is a great story so far, please keep it up!
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, thank you for writing this. It's my favourite yuri pairing and I've been waiting for someone to write something for it. Thankyouthankyouthankyou, and please keep writing!!
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, and good job on chapter two. I agree with your decision to build a relationship before having them get physical as I believe it will add more impact and power to your story. I'm not used to chapters being so short, but it is a style in-and-of itself, so do what you feel is right, it's your story. You're doing great, please update soon.
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this! This is great, and I don't think I've ever seen a serious yuri fic on aff before. You're a trend-setter! (I hope) And Temari/Hinata! Gotta be my fave yuri pair for Naruto. The only place I've seen a little of that is in Trollmia's fic 'Yaoi Fangirls' (very good). So, if it doesn't inconvenience you too much, please write some more, and soon!
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story I've been hoping to see a HinTema here and no ones has done it. Please update as soon as poslblem. =)
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really good. Temari and Hinata, i like that pairing. please continue, for a first time with no one giving u advice u did great.
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Good beginnings!! Cant wait for more!!
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was good...try to be more describtive...and try to slow down the love...ya know...this was pretty good though...never seen a HinataXTemari before...cant wait for the next chapter....update soon...seeya...