rate_review Reviews

Dammit, I want the last half hour of my life back. Please take this piece of shit down and don't even think about reposting it. Your grammar, spelling, and sentance structure need a LOT of work. I think you have the potential to be a resonable author, but this is a horrible example of writing. It's like it was written by a three-year old, to be quite frank. This is not a flame, just some much-need harsh constructive critism.

This story was so bad I think you gave me cancer.

Hey nice story but you need to take your time and write this story a lot better I can't understand what your saying for half of the people and You don't use proper writing for your paragraphs. I don't like how everything is smashed together without any kind of clearity. Other than the unclearity of your story it is ok and proof read your story to make sure your readers won't get confused

YOU SUCK ASS


YOU WRITE LIKE A RETARDED CHIPMUNK