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this was good until the whole Sasuke/Hinata thing happened, then went downhill fast... nothing against your style or storyline, but combine that with the arranged marriage deal, I personally stopped liking it... and I am sorry, because it was good to a point...

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great fic :D but i think chapter 22 is missing :D keep up the great work :D

holy shit!!! only the first chapter into this thing and i HAD to write a review. Normally i wait until i reach the last posted chapter before i review but this first chapter was just....well jsut so raw and realistic it was a impressive and compelling view into the potential and passion you have for story telling and character study. absolutely brilliant. Since you are such a talented (and i realyl do mean that been reding fan fics for years now) i would be honored and greatly appreciate it if you woudl read my story (Uzumaki Redemption) and posted helpful hints from time to time

Don't you dare. You don't change those chapters that I love so much. The kinky stuff makes it unique hon. I like everything you have written down. Nothing I've read from you is ever too vulgar, so you shouldn't worry at all.

Nice story! I like the humor in it the most!

I forgot to ask this on the reveiw I left on FF, but are you actually going to have Sakura actually say she loves Naruto anytime soon? She hasn't directly said it to him, although a lot of what she said could be inferred into that she loves him, but I think it would mean more to him if she actually said it.
SOrry for rambling, it's just my thoughts. Also, are they going to announce their relationship if they can get Sakura's parents to back off? Just a question.
Update soon please?

That obstacle course sounds easy, so easy. Sakura's mom could even run it. :p

And then I would have her eaten by snakes and dogs because she's a *censored*

Love your fic, keep updating please. I have high hopes that that whole tour around the obstacle course was an important set-up for something major in the next chapter, because it made up most of this chapter.

At the very least, Naruto should win this one and Sakura should lose, and be his nanny, giggidygiggidygoo.

Chiao,
Snake-eat-dog,
TEOATG&B

Oh my god! Love the new chap. You updated one of the very first fanfics I ever read and got me totally hooked! Please keep it going.

Hey Boyarina how ya been. I hope you drop me a line sometime. Love the update and hope to see more of your stories up and about soon thanks for the good read