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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice update I like the story for it too. Hopefully you can clear up about the shirt from Sasuke part. Why didn't Sakura beat Naruto up after he didn't let his hand fall from her breast when she moved her hand from his. And I guess I would of done the same thing if I was him let it stay there in it's spot. Hopefully you will slow the scenes down a bit and clear up in the story who is talking Other than that great writing. Keep it up
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
K, I'm slightly curious, where's part one of trying not to obsess? Still really good though, just feeling a little confused is all.
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so funny! It's a great story.
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I'm hooked already. Please continue.
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice work, keep going.
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hope you make this a bit more interesting and longer so we can understand the story your writing and keep up the good work.
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i luv naruto. . . he is so cute. . . poor sakura had to be swept up for the ride
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hrm.
well,let's see. keep on writing. i don't know if this is goingto be good, or a Trainwreck.
well,let's see. keep on writing. i don't know if this is goingto be good, or a Trainwreck.
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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey nice start.... plzz carry on
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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's good, so yeah, please go on.