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for Tonight, In the Sand

by AkiraDawn

schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"de-virginized the Kazekage"...that is great, you go Tenten! Really good fic. I enjoyed reading it bunches and bunches. A pairing that I don't see too often, so it was refreshing.
person prinlita
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic was so awesome!!! Seriously there are no other Gaara fics like this one. I loved it, and nobody writes about Gaara as kazekage very well. But you did, and I can't say enough that i loved this fic. The humor was great too, and i loved the neji teasing. Write other fics because you rock!!!
person randomperson with no life...
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chapter 3-

oh and all night romp huh?? that sounds interesting...hhehehe...great chapter....very smutty...yays!!...i so can't wait for the next chapter...hurry and update soon please...seeya....
person randomperson with no life...
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chapter 4-

hahahahaha!! that was too funny with the ending...hehehehe...i love it...jeez Neji is so cute...i would so do that..."You slept with the Kazekage!" i would so tease a friend like that...hehehehe...that was awesome...too bad its over...ah well...hey i would really love it if you did something else like this...ya know except could you do KankuroXTenten...that would be awesome!! seriously!! well that was a suggestion...seeya...
person Koea
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seems interesting so far ^.^ Keep at it! I look forward to reading more!!
person randomperson with no life...
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chapter 2-

sweet...hehehehe...i seriously love this pairing...i so can't wait for the next update...its gonna get hot in there....hehehe...and the part with Neji was so cute...anywho...update soon please....seeya....
person Mahha55
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Ive never read this paring before but I think it will be awesome!
person randomperson with no life...
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh i like this so far....so very interesting...i so cant wait for the next update...hurry please....this is so kool...well i gotta go...update soon again....seeya....