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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated! It seems to be developing quite nicely.
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story has a good base plot, but somethings seemed to be moving a bit too quick in some parts. It could help the story if some things were explained a bit more or if the characters didn't blurt outright what was to be said. One thing that lost me though was why Iruka was told what happened. It makes no sense to tell a Chuunin teacher something like that other than "he's watching Naruto" sort of thing. I like the work though and hope you keep updating.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue! I want to know what happens next!
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAYAYAYAAY you updated! :D i cant wait to see how this story turns out !
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like how you have Itachi in this. It is a really good start and I am definitely looking forward to reading more of it.
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Kakashi and Iruka im so happy i love that pairing! and u put an Itachi and Naruto in here? double YAY!!! i think Itachi is so awesome i an think ItaxNaru is like the third best pairing in the anime first is KakaxIru then SasuxNaru followed by ItaxNaru so thank u!! i hope u update soon!!!
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice. It seems really interesting so far.^^
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story so far!) Looking forward to reading more of it.
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WoW i really like this ^_^, i like how Itachi isnt really evil.
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Fanfic cant wait till next chapterXD